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Feast O’ demons
Blood sucking humans, we are all
Down to hell’s darkest we should fall
All our days are hollowed we ween
Killing in the name of love and of deen
Angles have left us to sing and pray
To the one who’s game we think we play
Beheading dreams of those we slay
Men, women, children of yesterday
Teeth digging deep in innocent hearts
Drinking blood as souls we rip apart
Night or day in darkness all the same
Standard bearing righteousness we think we claim
We don’t deserve to live happily ever after
Open those gates let in those demons of the hereafter
Let them feast on our rotten stinking souls
Drink blood out of our dripping veins and holes
This world was not meant for us to copulate
The first sin man had already demonstrate
So feast O’ demons O’ feast
So man will not have to re-procreate
Written by
Samnash
(Sam Nash)
Published 28th Sep 2024
Author's Note
For Fia's Spooky Event comp....
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Re. Feast O’ demons
28th Sep 2024 7:29pm
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28th Sep 2024 7:43pm
Thank you ... usually I'm not that dark... but lately ... the world is getting darker and darker
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29th Sep 2024 12:03pm
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Re. Feast O’ demons
29th Sep 2024 3:51am
Sinister ink, Sam. Best of luck in the competition. Appreciate you.
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Re. Feast O’ demons
29th Sep 2024 1:42pm
What an awesome entry - love the dark vibe of it.
...I love some blood in a poem, good luck in the comp :-)
...I love some blood in a poem, good luck in the comp :-)
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Re: Re. Feast O’ demons
29th Sep 2024 4:08pm
I don’t think I have a chance in the comp… come on … have you seen some of those poets out there?! I’m screwed… well, at least I can sleep knowing you have my back side… oh crap …. I’m screwed either way aren’t I ?!
Re: Re. Feast O’ demons
1st Oct 2024 12:38pm
Yes, I've seen those - admitted: it's hard to compete with some. I'm working on a piece too, though I don't expect to win it. It's nice to get out of your comfort zone once in a while...
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Re. Feast O’ demons
29th Sep 2024 5:36pm
Very good! Also very different from what you usually write. I agree with this all the way. People are bad even when they try to be good.
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Re: Re. Feast O’ demons
29th Sep 2024 6:10pm
yeh... I was hoping you would not agree with me.. I was really hoping I was wrong... unfortunately
Re: Re. Feast O’ demons
29th Sep 2024 6:27pm
Haha. It is better to have knowledge than ignorant. In the end, at least.
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30th Sep 2024 3:29pm
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5th Oct 2024 3:50am
Re. Feast O’ demons
2nd Oct 2024 2:10pm
I whole heartedly concur with you.
This is a very well crafted piece.❤️
All the best ,dear Sam👍
This is a very well crafted piece.❤️
All the best ,dear Sam👍
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5th Oct 2024 3:51am