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Gone

Sitting here alone
Waiting for someone to share
Speak before I die
Vision_of_insanity
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Re. Gone
(Fia Naturie)
23rd Sep 2024 8:57pm
Are you still there? Death comes for us all but not for you yet buddy. Because I say so.;))
fianaturie8
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Re: Re. Gone
23rd Sep 2024 9:35pm
Fantastic comment. Love it. Thank you Fia.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Gone
24th Sep 2024 2:38am
You ain't going anywhere son...
Have another whiskey and chill ..
PoetSpeak
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Re: Re. Gone
24th Sep 2024 1:34pm
Thanks but the "I" isn't me. I'm not going anywhere. Just a story. Thanks for reading.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Gone
25th Sep 2024 1:14pm
I'd like to share my ball of hair from my comb this morning. Don't die!
AfterSexDilemma
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Re: Re. Gone
25th Sep 2024 1:15pm
great. send a photo of your ball of hair
Vision_of_insanity
Re: Re. Gone
25th Sep 2024 1:18pm
Don't mind if I do :D
AfterSexDilemma
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Re: Re. Gone
25th Sep 2024 1:23pm
waiting......
Vision_of_insanity

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