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in your eyes
how her
words easily
affect me,
her tongue
speaks,
she is
far
too kind
to me,
her eyes
watch,
and i
believe
they approve,
and her
flesh,
finished
so well,
persuades
me in
my decisions,
she sets
off
a hunger
within
myself,
but before
i can
get my
feast
of answers,
she
vanishes,
waiting to
open
the eyes
of needful
others.
words easily
affect me,
her tongue
speaks,
she is
far
too kind
to me,
her eyes
watch,
and i
believe
they approve,
and her
flesh,
finished
so well,
persuades
me in
my decisions,
she sets
off
a hunger
within
myself,
but before
i can
get my
feast
of answers,
she
vanishes,
waiting to
open
the eyes
of needful
others.
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Re. in your eyes
23rd Sep 2024 9:38am
Re: Re. in your eyes
23rd Sep 2024 9:42am
Re. in your eyes
23rd Sep 2024 11:04am
Beautifully written, and this whole stanza is gorgeous poetry:
“and her
flesh,
finished
so well,
persuades
me in
my decisions,”
“and her
flesh,
finished
so well,
persuades
me in
my decisions,”
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Re: Re. in your eyes
23rd Sep 2024 11:05am
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23rd Sep 2024 6:39pm
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23rd Sep 2024 6:40pm
Re. in your eyes
24th Sep 2024 1:49am
Flesh does persuade.
Attraction does have a job to do after all.
Great write wolf.
Attraction does have a job to do after all.
Great write wolf.
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