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Let Me Serve You
There is a hidden statement within the poem. Take the first word from every stanza and you will see.
I want to serve you
not as a servant to her Master
but to a lover to whom she loves
Let me serve you
as you lay down on silken sheets
in a scented room of passionflower
You deserve me serving you
As you watch my deliberate movement
showing all the care I can pour into it
In serving you
I will massage away the tightened muscle
To be replaced by my complete devotion
Love serving you
Gentle lips glide over relaxed skin
Where planted kisses silently serve
Author's Note
300th Poem
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23rd Sep 2024 2:21am
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23rd Sep 2024 2:26am
You don't have to be royalty to love service, even a pauper can enjoy a night of being served. Tight
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23rd Sep 2024 2:32am
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23rd Sep 2024 3:21am
the room is full of sensuality n there's a lot to be served...splendid poetry...
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23rd Sep 2024 3:22am
Seductive write. Happy 300th. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
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23rd Sep 2024 6:00am
The sentence one can make from the first word of each stanza sums up the ultimate aim:
I let you in, love [added comma]
A savourable 300th, worth my RL.
I let you in, love [added comma]
A savourable 300th, worth my RL.
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23rd Sep 2024 11:36am
Spectacular
A man would be so blessed to have you ....
BIG 300th LIKE
Congratulations
RL AWARD
A man would be so blessed to have you ....
BIG 300th LIKE
Congratulations
RL AWARD
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