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The Embace Of Fragility
fragility
vulnerability
within this heart
is the blood
fiowing
through it
rip open
my torso
then see
the honesty
of my
truths
would cover
you in
my blood
if it meant
i would
be felt
is it weak
to want you
need you
strength
is waning
fast
you need
only place
your hand in mine
to show
that i'm worthy
of sharing your pain
vulnerability
within this heart
is the blood
fiowing
through it
rip open
my torso
then see
the honesty
of my
truths
would cover
you in
my blood
if it meant
i would
be felt
is it weak
to want you
need you
strength
is waning
fast
you need
only place
your hand in mine
to show
that i'm worthy
of sharing your pain
Published 21st Sep 2024
Author's Note
wrote this July 2023
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21st Sep 2024 2:22pm
21st Sep 2024 3:07pm
21st Sep 2024 2:51pm
The dramatic contrast between the vivid gore and the tenderness of the ending is great.
21st Sep 2024 3:09pm
I can be a bit dramatic and maybe I was watching a horror movie while writing
21st Sep 2024 4:37pm
What a lovely self-offering, AP. Just don't deplete yourself or you'll have nothing to help others with. xo
21st Sep 2024 5:05pm
21st Sep 2024 10:23pm
Dear AP,
I enjoyed the raw naked honesty in this piece. Giving beyond what was good for the soul. Great write. H🌷
I enjoyed the raw naked honesty in this piece. Giving beyond what was good for the soul. Great write. H🌷
21st Sep 2024 11:17pm
22nd Sep 2024 5:31am
Why are you hiding behind your old memories and poems… tell us what you feel now… as much as those poems are great… ok maybe I overstepped…. I’m sorry.
22nd Sep 2024 6:38am
since you asked I write like a waterfall sometimes since beginning of August over 500 poems so with DUP rules can't post all of them
so even though I write currently I think older poems deserve light
so even though I write currently I think older poems deserve light
22nd Sep 2024 12:28pm
This is a brilliant write. One needs to be willing to be vulnerable to love with the whole heart. I enjoyed the last stanza as well..."I am worthy of sharing your pain". Clearly you understand empathy. Such a gift. Thanks for sharing.
Bless,
Mel
Bless,
Mel
22nd Sep 2024 12:32pm
