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Listen To The Falling Rain
Like a piano strokes on my roof
Oh, the rain sounds like a melody !
Under crimson-tiles water proof
Reviving the olden times simplicity
Awakened in the mid somber night
Listening to a showering Euphory
With each key, nodes come untight
Taken far away from mundane misery
Winter gently tapping on my roof
Telling the story of the hungry wolf
When in days of fairy tale and yore
Grandma used to spin a happy folklore
Under the warm flank of night i snug
Let the dripping points write their poesy
Let the whispering sounds form a track
'bout the happy moments of simplicity
Each drop that falls leaves an echo
With eyes closed, sounds grow e'en more
And each drop in the dark night will outdo
The vision with rain drops falling galore
https://youtu.be/3VPFzo50yiM
.an old poem.
Oh, the rain sounds like a melody !
Under crimson-tiles water proof
Reviving the olden times simplicity
Awakened in the mid somber night
Listening to a showering Euphory
With each key, nodes come untight
Taken far away from mundane misery
Winter gently tapping on my roof
Telling the story of the hungry wolf
When in days of fairy tale and yore
Grandma used to spin a happy folklore
Under the warm flank of night i snug
Let the dripping points write their poesy
Let the whispering sounds form a track
'bout the happy moments of simplicity
Each drop that falls leaves an echo
With eyes closed, sounds grow e'en more
And each drop in the dark night will outdo
The vision with rain drops falling galore
https://youtu.be/3VPFzo50yiM
.an old poem.
Published 21st Sep 2024
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21st Sep 2024 3:45pm
Sometimes life is simple: You see a poem by poeticdelight, you click on it and you get something awesome. This one also coincides with my own personal choice to center my life around peace and simple joys, and the mood of the poem fits this very well.
I am glad you find something relatable my friend,
Childhood and rain are like bosom friends, they dont split, always
stick together.Thank you for your sweet feedback.Hamid
BTW. heaps of thanks for the RL. add; it really warms the heart..
Childhood and rain are like bosom friends, they dont split, always
stick together.Thank you for your sweet feedback.Hamid
BTW. heaps of thanks for the RL. add; it really warms the heart..
21st Sep 2024 4:06pm
This is sweet. I can imagine laying on grandma's lap and having her stroke my hair and telling me a story. Beautiful
21st Sep 2024 5:01pm
Thank you Fia, more than comments, your presence is the most
precious thing ever.
Hamid best regards.
precious thing ever.
Hamid best regards.
22nd Sep 2024 2:54am
22nd Sep 2024 8:26am
Classics are the basics.
we try to build the roof before the base, it will surely crumble..
Classics are the original academics of any learning that will
stand against the sands of time..
Thank you Naajir ,dear friend; happy to see you again. Hamid
we try to build the roof before the base, it will surely crumble..
Classics are the original academics of any learning that will
stand against the sands of time..
Thank you Naajir ,dear friend; happy to see you again. Hamid
