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and every day a star is born from the ocean
the moonlight
loves the sea immensely,
even though the night is awake,
it bathes the sea
with its love every day...
n iIf the virgin wind
ever touches
the waves of the sea,
the moonlight turns red
with anger...
loves the sea immensely,
even though the night is awake,
it bathes the sea
with its love every day...
n iIf the virgin wind
ever touches
the waves of the sea,
the moonlight turns red
with anger...
Published 18th Sep 2024
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2024 6:03pm
What gorgeous imagery this carries. Love the thought of stars born by the ocean
21st Sep 2024 5:02pm
20th Sep 2024 9:01am
There is beautiful relationship with the Moon and a woman. Beautiful thoughts.
" it bathes the sea"
Quite deep..
" it bathes the sea"
Quite deep..
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21st Sep 2024 4:40am
You and in me in a boat looking at the moonlight together is hot. Keep on writing.
21st Sep 2024 5:01pm
Anonymous
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22nd Sep 2024 4:39pm
Of course, even the wind can't interfere where the passion of love prevails... :)
