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Nothing left to See
It's time to dry the tears off the floor
You will never see them anymore
I sit here thinking about how this all went wrong
Like the melody of a tragic love song
Once upon a time, there was a me
Shiny and new for everyone to see
The ending of this perfect melody
Was the day you said hello to me
There
is
no
more
of
me
for
you
to
see .
.
You will never see them anymore
I sit here thinking about how this all went wrong
Like the melody of a tragic love song
Once upon a time, there was a me
Shiny and new for everyone to see
The ending of this perfect melody
Was the day you said hello to me
There
is
no
more
of
me
for
you
to
see .
.
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Re. Nothing left to See
16th Sep 2024 11:33pm
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16th Sep 2024 11:34pm
Re. Nothing left to See
16th Sep 2024 11:37pm
I knew it! I should have kept my mouth shut, lol. Where have you gone? 😉
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16th Sep 2024 11:47pm
Re. Nothing left to See
16th Sep 2024 11:54pm
I too liked the way this was laid out and the message is clear. Great job. See you on the other side.
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16th Sep 2024 11:55pm
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17th Sep 2024 1:19pm
Poetry sometimes comes true, it holds a sincere realistic message, like this one, thou' hope its only poetry..
Good read Fia. Hamid best wishes
Good read Fia. Hamid best wishes
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Re. Nothing left to See
17th Sep 2024 9:44pm
I love the way you've dropped that last line down...like a tear falling. I also like the way it's a little open ended. Very nicely done!
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17th Sep 2024 9:45pm