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A Ghost of a Rose
what do you say when its over
how do you form the words
to reach those gone forever
down that long winding road
can they see you
or feel you when you weep
will they weep too
or will they just stay asleep
there's an empty tea cup
next to an empty plate here tonight
my prayers and my hope
you're somewhere happy and warm
how do you form the words
to reach those gone forever
down that long winding road
can they see you
or feel you when you weep
will they weep too
or will they just stay asleep
there's an empty tea cup
next to an empty plate here tonight
my prayers and my hope
you're somewhere happy and warm
Author's Note
My foster sister and friend went to glory yesterday (15 Sept 2024) morning. Rest in Peace, sister of my heart. Until next.
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Re. A Ghost of a Rose
16th Sep 2024 5:04pm
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16th Sep 2024 5:09pm
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17th Sep 2024 7:45am
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16th Sep 2024 6:17pm
Re. A Ghost of a Rose
17th Sep 2024 1:34am
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17th Sep 2024 7:47am
Re. A Ghost of a Rose
17th Sep 2024 11:40am
My deepest condolences on the loss of your sister and friend, Grace. This is a lovely tribute. May beautiful memories of your time together on Earth fill the empty space in your heart in the difficult days to come. xo
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17th Sep 2024 5:09pm
Thank you for the kind words and the RL, Ahavati. We had good times together:) Its terrible when you lose someone close and feeling like you never spent enough time with them.
Re. A Ghost of a Rose
21st Sep 2024 4:25am
Sorry for your loss. You should a plant a flower in her memory in your garden. Keep on writing.
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21st Sep 2024 7:11am
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25th Sep 2024 11:22am
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2nd Oct 2024 10:26pm
Sorry to hear of your loss Grace. Gathering from this piece, this was a beautiful relationship. May her memory bring your some comfort.
Blessings.
Blessings.
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Hi Wally. She was my foster sister and we used to say 'sister of the heart'. As a teenager she was my place to go. Her passing came as a shock as we were chatting on the phone all the time.
Anyway..thanks for reading and commenting and the RL. Much appreciated as always.🌹
Anyway..thanks for reading and commenting and the RL. Much appreciated as always.🌹