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incomplete love or infinite love
today someone else
was sitting with him
in front of the mirror
instead of me,,,
but the dust
on the mirror
showed my face...
was that a fault
of the eyes?
or
did the mirror
deceive him???
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Re. incomplete love or infinite love
2nd Sep 2024 12:23pm
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2nd Sep 2024 2:11pm
Re. incomplete love or infinite love
2nd Sep 2024 12:40pm
I really like this. I took it as you sitting in front of the mirror talking about yourself sitting next to him but he was looking at the mirror and he was trying to contemplate what he is seeing.
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2nd Sep 2024 2:12pm
Re. incomplete love or infinite love
2nd Sep 2024 2:11pm
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2nd Sep 2024 3:10pm
Re. incomplete love or infinite love
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2024 3:05pm
Like an image echo, you remain
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2nd Sep 2024 3:11pm
Re. incomplete love or infinite love
3rd Sep 2024 3:25am
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3rd Sep 2024 4:08pm
Re. incomplete love or infinite love
4th Sep 2024 3:44am
really cool write, made me think of horror movies where what you see is not what you imagine it to be.
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4th Sep 2024 4:51am
Re. incomplete love or infinite love
6th Sep 2024 00:38am
Maybe both. There is no guarantee in Love. You got to keep the flames burning. Keep on writing.
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6th Sep 2024 3:27am