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Father I could never be happier
Father I could never be happier
Knowing that you belong
In my life every single day
Also father you created me
In you image
Many years ago
End also you had given me
The gift of life
Here on earth
I am very happy to be living that
Life that is a simple one
And I am must tell you father
That I am you son
That makes me happy
To know that I am you son
Father we also have a good
Relationship like father and son
Also it is you son that prays every night
Before going to bed to sleep
Father I could never be happier
Knowing that you belong
In my life every single day
Also father you created me
In you image
Many years ago
End also you had given me
The gift of life
Here on earth
I am very happy to be living that
Life that is a simple one
And I am must tell you father
That I am you son
That makes me happy
To know that I am you son
Father we also have a good
Relationship like father and son
Also it is you son that prays every night
Before going to bed to sleep
Knowing that you belong
In my life every single day
Also father you created me
In you image
Many years ago
End also you had given me
The gift of life
Here on earth
I am very happy to be living that
Life that is a simple one
And I am must tell you father
That I am you son
That makes me happy
To know that I am you son
Father we also have a good
Relationship like father and son
Also it is you son that prays every night
Before going to bed to sleep
Father I could never be happier
Knowing that you belong
In my life every single day
Also father you created me
In you image
Many years ago
End also you had given me
The gift of life
Here on earth
I am very happy to be living that
Life that is a simple one
And I am must tell you father
That I am you son
That makes me happy
To know that I am you son
Father we also have a good
Relationship like father and son
Also it is you son that prays every night
Before going to bed to sleep
Published 25th Aug 2024
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25th Aug 2024 9:56pm
Your poem beautifully expresses gratitude and love for your father. The repetition emphasizes the depth of your feelings, though varying the phrasing could enhance the flow. The heartfelt simplicity is touching, but refining the structure and grammar would make it even more impactful. Overall, it's a sincere and moving tribute.
Nice weight up.
Nice weight up.
25th Aug 2024 10:17pm
