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Dead guy in the corvette
He shot that dude like it was nothing
I never seen anything like it in my life
He pulled up to the red light
Got out of his car
He walked over to the Corvette and fired three shots into the drivers face
He then calmly returned to his car
He had the music up really loud
Some horrible 10th rate rap from today
Pure shit!
He just wasted that fucker!
Anyway,
The light turned green and he took off
So did everybody else
Except for the dead guy in the Corvette
I never seen anything like it in my life
He pulled up to the red light
Got out of his car
He walked over to the Corvette and fired three shots into the drivers face
He then calmly returned to his car
He had the music up really loud
Some horrible 10th rate rap from today
Pure shit!
He just wasted that fucker!
Anyway,
The light turned green and he took off
So did everybody else
Except for the dead guy in the Corvette
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Re. Dead guy in the corvette
24th Aug 2024 12:06pm
The sad thing is this really happens.
I always like your endings - kinda like oh well
I always like your endings - kinda like oh well
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Re: Re. Dead guy in the corvette
24th Aug 2024 12:09pm
HA! Yes. That's where the satire comes in. I try & give a little bit of humor with these grim tales.
Thanks for your comments
Thanks for your comments
Re: Re. Dead guy in the corvette
24th Aug 2024 12:12pm
That's why your stories work so well. As grim as they are you lighten it with humor
Have a nice weekend!
Have a nice weekend!
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Re: Re. Dead guy in the corvette
24th Aug 2024 12:17pm
Re. Dead guy in the corvette
24th Aug 2024 1:11pm
I agree with Debbie this happens way to much in this world. Nicely done Fia xoxo
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24th Aug 2024 1:14pm
Re. Dead guy in the corvette
24th Aug 2024 1:32pm
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24th Aug 2024 3:47pm
Re. Dead guy in the corvette
24th Aug 2024 10:59pm
Lol reminds me of the guy who shot up the mosque in new Zealand. Just hopped in his car and left lmao.
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Re: Re. Dead guy in the corvette
25th Aug 2024 12:05pm
Re. Dead guy in the corvette
26th Aug 2024 11:32am
Nice realism to the tale, could've been pulled from any headline. Good job.
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26th Aug 2024 11:33am