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And In the Morning
As sunlight streams through
The small spaces between the blinds
The smile begins to form in my lips
My arm curls around your hip
Will your thoughts be as mine?
That this moment
In all its stillness
And perfect brilliance
Is what you’ve been waiting for
Or will you
Be wondering how you can quietly
Slip through my arms and out my door?
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Copyright @ Her 2024. All rights reserved.
Had a dream last night. Still processing.
Had a dream last night. Still processing.
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Re. And In the Morning
24th Aug 2024 11:06am
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24th Aug 2024 11:12am
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Anonymous
24th Aug 2024 11:58am
What started as a beautiful dream, became quite confusing. I hope this comes with a sequal and that he stayed :-)
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24th Aug 2024 10:44pm
There is no sequel. He didn't stay. As a matter of fact, he's half way around the world right now while I continue to attempt to expunge him from my heart.
I don't think it's going to work.
I don't think it's going to work.
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24th Aug 2024 12:09pm
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Re. And In the Morning
24th Aug 2024 3:32pm
Yes, I remember your very witty 'revolving door' write to aid lovers their quiet & speedy exit, lol. I hope obviously there is less need for that fixture now! The hope, longing, wish & tenderness of this spill is not lost on me, however. 😊
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24th Aug 2024 10:45pm
Re. And In the Morning
24th Aug 2024 4:00pm
Sometimes we have dreams that are involved in sending us a picture of things, to come our way what's good or bad for if someone is truthful about there intentions, there's no reason to doubt them for humans are creatures of habits for if you know the lies from deception proves that you've been there before so why worry about something that you never really had could you can't miss what you never had but you can't miss what you did have when it was good and special 😔🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re: Re. And In the Morning
24th Aug 2024 10:47pm
I admit, sometimes I don't like how wise you are, my friend. But it's only because I know you are right and your intentions are pure.
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24th Aug 2024 6:42pm
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24th Aug 2024 10:47pm
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24th Aug 2024 9:22pm
Re. And In the Morning
24th Aug 2024 11:47pm
the touch of your arm on his hip should have been all that was needed on that brilliant morning.
Enjoyed!
down2dirt
Enjoyed!
down2dirt
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24th Aug 2024 11:51pm
Re. And In the Morning
25th Aug 2024 00:16am
Keep processing, beauty. Keep processing. This is delicate. You shattered your own hope for the reader in a way that’s purely brilliant.
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Re. And In the Morning
25th Aug 2024 2:26pm
Your words create beautiful artwork even when it's expressing poignancy ....great write
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25th Aug 2024 6:38pm
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