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Gym
More skin in the gym
Than I see home in a year
I need to get slim
Than I see home in a year
I need to get slim
Published 23rd Aug 2024
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moving to the gym (A 5-7-5 haiku)
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23rd Aug 2024 3:15pm
Work outs in the gym can be hard or soft; fast or slow, up or down....results is what matters. Great write. Hugs and love,Oral
23rd Aug 2024 3:17pm
23rd Aug 2024 3:21pm
Yes, the UP kept Jim going back to the gym, experimenting with new routines...maybe that's how Jim became Jimmy.
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23rd Aug 2024 3:39pm
Well Damn it.... I am in the gym...On this diet...And she get's the Up's? Not sure how I feel about this?!?!?
23rd Aug 2024 4:02pm
you have to come to my gym... its obvious she know what she is doing... I just go to watch...
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23rd Aug 2024 6:18pm
nice write. A gym is the ideal place to check the ladies out. I have them come over my place instead and they work me out!
23rd Aug 2024 6:27pm
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23rd Aug 2024 7:23pm
You'll see even more skin at a swimming pool (I used to exercise in those places. during lunch hours from my then work).
23rd Aug 2024 7:25pm
24th Aug 2024 7:19am
Further comment - gyms (and more so swimming pool) are a good place to dress down to the minimum while you try to keep fat to the minimum.
24th Aug 2024 12:03pm
Smiles, I just started working out - gyms rock and with a girl like that you have a great incentive :-)
24th Aug 2024 3:42pm
So you are going to the gym to check out the boys and girls?!? Wow…. And I thought I was the only one
