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Proud
You’ll always be my little brother
A man who toured the States
Dropping bass lines like no other
It’s your presence that resonates
Getting choked up by memories
Crying while laughing out loud
Music gifted us social remedies
Most of all you made me proud
A man who toured the States
Dropping bass lines like no other
It’s your presence that resonates
Getting choked up by memories
Crying while laughing out loud
Music gifted us social remedies
Most of all you made me proud
Published 20th Aug 2024
Author's Note
Just thinking about my baby brother. Who's getting ready to have surgery. I know I'm the older brother but I look up to him so much. He's always inspired and supported me. Usually people say it's the little brother, that looks up to his older brother. Not in my case. I'd trade places with him if I could. I'm counting on you to kick out. Love you, bro.
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20th Aug 2024 11:28am
Dear DL,
There is nothing as special as sibling bonds. The love resonates from this piece and I find that exceptional. I wish your brother the very best of outcomes and a speedy recovery. Lovely write. H🌷
There is nothing as special as sibling bonds. The love resonates from this piece and I find that exceptional. I wish your brother the very best of outcomes and a speedy recovery. Lovely write. H🌷
21st Aug 2024 3:12am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support. Thanks so much for the well wishes for him. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
20th Aug 2024 11:30am
This poem and the meaning behind it hurt. I am the older sister and to go through what you're going through...I cannot imagine. (Sending you a hug)
21st Aug 2024 3:14am
Thanks so much for the kind words and continued support. Fia. Also thanks for the hug. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
20th Aug 2024 2:34pm
I love the sibling relationship reflected in this verse, Damian. I will keep your brother in my thoughts and send positive juju and belief in his complete recovery. ❤️
21st Aug 2024 3:16am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support. I appreciate the positive vibes for him. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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21st Aug 2024 3:18am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support. Also thanks for the RL. I'm sorry for your loss. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
