Power-Trip

Thought provoking!

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I will be so glad when this election is over! That final stanza nails it.

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This makes me think of The Masons possibly. There are many in our shadow government.
Very strong write.

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'' Secret meeting behind the door
Wealthy men bonding in hatred
Carving flesh on the killing floor
For the power they hold sacred ''

Great dismount...superb observation.

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This is a powerful write. Secret meetings behind closed doors. Always something hidden, never goes well. Nice Dl  Fia xoxo

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Very suggestive of corruption in life.  I really like the 3rd stanza, in how it conveys the satire and parody of society.  That's the kind of puppeteering that comes from the religions of the world, none of which are right, nor have the answers.  It could be considered motive and intent in politics as well, of which you make clear in the following stanza.  This poem is kind of dark, and in some of that struggle, we seem to identify commonly as artists.  It comes from place of deep conviction, I feel.  It makes me long for justice, purpose, truth, peace, and prosperous change.  You really are true in what you say with "sacred hatred," in the way that man sees "succession."  Anyway, overall, great job of capturing a captivating look behind the paradigm algorithms of modern society.

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Sometimes it feels like there's no room for fragile souls in this world, though it takes strength to be fragile. Some sharp observations here, DL, love this piece.

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