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Sacred Pear
They laid me down in red satin
to feel the soft texture on my skin
I wear jewels from head to toe
drawing your eyes to my natural beauty
They painted my eyes in black coal
to bring the carnal fire out
Lips stained with dark cherries
so your tongue will be sweet and remember mine
Golden-scented oil was rubbed into my skin
for my lover is the only one to touch and leave me touched
I lay before you, ready, willing, and enamored
for you are the first and the last to taste this pear on my sacred tree
to feel the soft texture on my skin
I wear jewels from head to toe
drawing your eyes to my natural beauty
They painted my eyes in black coal
to bring the carnal fire out
Lips stained with dark cherries
so your tongue will be sweet and remember mine
Golden-scented oil was rubbed into my skin
for my lover is the only one to touch and leave me touched
I lay before you, ready, willing, and enamored
for you are the first and the last to taste this pear on my sacred tree
Author's Note
There is a story of the Sacred Pear tree that I used as a prompt
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17th Aug 2024 1:38am
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17th Aug 2024 3:10am
A very sexy and seductive write. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
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17th Aug 2024 12:12pm
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A beautiful poem, in way so like the Hebrew Song of Solomon in the Bible. This sounds so much the kind between a couple committed to each other through life, let none else touch, the princess that has found her prince. Poem matches well the picture except the colour of the garments.
The title could also have double entendre in reference to her breasts (parts Solomon wasn't too shy to mention in his Song). This has just inspired a poem, which could be a sequel to yours, titled Sacred Pair, which I have just posted.
The title could also have double entendre in reference to her breasts (parts Solomon wasn't too shy to mention in his Song). This has just inspired a poem, which could be a sequel to yours, titled Sacred Pair, which I have just posted.
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17th Aug 2024 12:15pm
Oh so cool. Love inspiring others. 😊 will look at it.
I could not find the right garment 😏
Thank Solomon 😊
I could not find the right garment 😏
Thank Solomon 😊
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