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warrior

my tongue became fierce
once deciding to please her,
her voice filled the night.
goodwolf1966
Written by goodwolf1966 (jimmy)
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Re. warrior
(Fia Naturie)
16th Aug 2024 2:46am
This is so passionate. You can feel the emotion. Fia xoxo
fianaturie8
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Re: Re. warrior
(jimmy)
16th Aug 2024 2:52am
thank you Fia for the comments and RL add
goodwolf1966
Re. warrior
Anonymous
16th Aug 2024 3:42am
Oh my. Very nice.
Anonymous
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Re: Re. warrior
(jimmy)
16th Aug 2024 4:00am
thank you Pink
goodwolf1966
Re. warrior
16th Aug 2024 7:13am
Passionate cunnilingual haiku. Can easily see and hear the sequence in these lines:

once deciding to please her,
her voice filled the night.
Solomon_Song
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Re: Re. warrior
(jimmy)
16th Aug 2024 10:28am
thank you Solomon
goodwolf1966

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