Spoon

Very steamy writing here on this one. If I had unlimited RL's this one would be in the list. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

DL  

Dude, the RL limits are a pain. No worries!  
I appreciate it when someone lets me know that the effort to write/post was worth it. So thank you!

If you ever make her cry, I'm stealing your woman.  
Just fucking know that..  
 
ALSO? Adelphina? GIRL, your lingerie is GORGEOUS! We should seriously go underwear shopping together.  
 
What? There's a poem? I'm a bisexual Tasmanian Devil and I got distracted by delicate flower patterns on a perfect ass.  
 
Oh, right, the poem.  
 
Bro. You did good. This was filled with delicious metaphors, and you kept the extension of the primary trope true. The way you mixed in images like flavors was masterful. This is elevated. Perhaps one of your best. The word choice, the deliberation and how concise you were with each image was seriously next level.  
 
And I can SEE why you are leveling up. (I will seriously steal your girl if you ever fuck up.)  
 
But for realsies:  I respect you, and this is goddamn art.  
 
Also the poem is art-ish.  
 
WHAT?!  

Hey Betty:)

GIRL, I had a horrible migraine yesterday. that being said, you made me feel golden after I read this comment. I was laughing out loud and for a few moments my migraine vanished, so thank you for that.
I had a confident skip in my step today!

I'm printing this comment and framing it!
And when Mark steps out of line I'm making him
read it!!
 
And I love a good set of undies!

Thanks again for your snaps on my ass chica!!
You have awesome taste! hehehehe

I can't stop laughing at your comment!  
Del can't come to the DUP right now, but she laughed like crazy over your awesome comment too!  

I was going to write instead, as a poem under the pic:
"Blah blah
Blah blah blah
Blah blah
Blah."

Because that's all anyone will see!  Lol.

You're a trip!  And Del is quite happy with me!  She has her own bathroom here, with all her girlie gear stuff. I got the small bathroom for myself. Because I'm a gentleman. Ha!

Thanks for the recognition of my barely noticed poem. Lol. I understand!  

Steamy write of a cosy moments. Favourite verse:

In whispers, her words
trickle down my chest
We pray to the sungods
and to the night mages
As we coil in rawness
and sip the warmth
from our panting lips
-Slowing breath
Cooling words, down
from our precipice

Thank you sir. I try to give readers a worthwhile read wherever I post. I appreciate you sending me some kudos for my effort.

There is nothing so sensual, so safe, so sexy about spooning
with the one you love. Your words were passionate yet delicate.
Sensational job.

No matter how old I get, or how the day went, nothing beats just laying down for even a few minutes and sharing a moment holding on to the one you love. It's a reset. No heavy conversations, just sigh and breathe them in for a few minutes. It's a simple nurturing act that pays for itself in what returns to us. Yeah?
And thank you, D-Bear. I'm easily motivated by the one I cherish. Writing is now the receipts of it.

There is nothing so sensual, so safe, so sexy about spooning
with the one you love. Your words were passionate yet delicate.
Sensational job.

Mark this is beautiful. This part caught me:

for fate to make the night
as long as the day
-Had kept us apart

There's something about that which reminds me of a story I read long ago regarding one night with a lover rather than a lifetime without. And the prayers that it last longer than what was typically allowed.

Thank you Tammy.
That's a good comparison.  And yes, I'd take that just one night with her.  Because a lifetime of love notes would come of it.
I literally don't ask for much. So everything feels like a bonus.  

This piece is so full of intimacy & beauty...I don't even know where to start. Yes, your lady has a very fine derriere, let's get that out of the way straight out the gate. But the poem...damn, dude...this is everything a lover would want to read about the beauty of their place in your world, your heart, your bed. The photo is amazing but the poem is everything.

Hey Willow. I thank you much for that.
I'm a one woman guy, a relationship guy. So I invest my all once I have the one who can love me back unhindered. She is that. And I like to write about it.  

The pic was us just being flirty and such. But it is tasteful and yes, artistic!

Thanks for the approval, of both subjects! Lol

Spooning is the ultimate intimacy. Beautifully expressed here.

Yes, it is. I was just writing about that, up a few comments. It's a bond unbreakable.  And yes, intimate too.
Thanks for the compliment. The write was inspired obviously. But it is about the person, ultimately. Hearts accept the other as is. And so, as will be....

I love how this turned out!!

You have a way of making me feel empowered as a woman.
I've always been confident
because that's how I was raised, but you mister,
encourage me to embrace my femininity too.

You made soup exquisite in this write.
A completely original idea you ran with in your own Mark style.
I'm very honored to be a part of this art-ish poem:) haha
I feel very safe with you for obvious reasons.

I share it all with you baby:)

Your current avatar is perfect timing huh!  My little wonder woman in disguise!

   You, my love, are the type of woman that rulers launch a thousand ships to go after.
(Let's see who knows their history. Lol)
I don't have ships. I have my words. And my arms. And my devotion. And my patience, during our times that we are apart.
There is no replacing who you are to me. I have but one me, and I am all yours.

PS. You were already awesome. I just bring it to your attention.

This poem was beautifully written. The concept of the sungod and mages was nicely melded in this. The picture was perfect for this. Fia ;))

Thank you Fia. I had two writes started actually, and then chopped them up into this one. I've done that a time or two, and sometimes it reads fluidly and sometimes not.  I try!
I appreciate your comment greatly.

Absolutely beautiful! Flows so well... sensual... loving... this has it all...

Well thank you for that!  I tweaked two starter writes into one for this. And I kept editing it up until I posted it.!  It's good to know that my stress was worthwhile. Really!

Your first stanza is amazing.
I love "I sipped on caught hair one of her twenty thousand strands - Long ebony tresses".
Stunning poetry accompanied by a picture of perfección.

LJ

LJ

Hey you Lj.
Thank you so much for that. And I love love her long black hair. Even if she decides to cut it some. (She actually cut some of my hair. Mine is wiry and coarse and grey/white/brown. Lol)
   Sometimes I write decent stuff to be proud of. So any praise is fuel for me to keep on trying. So thank you.

This is especially well-crafted. All stanzas. Truly.

How's it going?!
This was actually two writes that I blended best I could. And I wanted some brevity, so a bunch was cut out too.  This is the Frankenstein result. Lol.
Thanks for your note of confidence. It helps me stay motivated!

While delicious, it was the crafting that is orgasmic. Congratulations.

Your wording is simply amazing,
I especially love these lines:

"Our aromas mixed in chaos
of steam and scent
and sighs and sweat"

It flows beautifully too. I LOVE the intimicy of this write, words every woman would love to hear, now... if only my guy was a poet, lol. As for the image: another incentive to work out. I don't have an ass - did I just admit that online? Oh yes, I did. Great piece, Styxian, enjoyed it tremendeously.

My dear, we all have our own mix of positives and negatives, the way we are put together. I'm built  like a tall stick. Lol. Yet, I'm okay, by now, with who I am and what I have to work with. Confidence is healthy, yes?  Besides, the older we get, all that matters is trying to stay healthy enough to last awhile longer!  
And thank you for the wonderful comment!  I'm probably on a long break from posting after tonight, so your comment is a real positive to see me off.
You keep posting your stuff too!!