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is there such a thing as love???
I think
Love = pain...
in which
people sow
seeds of stars and
always remain
immersed in the
thought of stars growing
on their earth...
reality puts a black blindfold
on its eyes for some time..
time appears golden
like honey
to the eyes of two people...
n in the beginning it
feels as if the key to
a treasure has been found...
but after some time
bushes start growing
in the beautiful garden of love
and starts to make the
beauty of love ugly
but it is felt only
when someone starts ignoring you
the words which seemed
as delicate as flowers till now,
that person's words
start to sting like thorns...
someone keeps on speaking
nd we keep on listening...
the love that enters the eyes
nd settles in the heart
becomes an salty ocean... f
floating emotions
keep struggling like a fish
to survive...
the analogy of
the moon and moonlight
proves to be wrong...
n finally love stops fragrant
and it gets buried in
a book forever
in the form of a dried rose...
Published 13th Aug 2024
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13th Aug 2024 5:43pm
I love this. It gives you sweet and sorrow and makes you think of past loves that fail. Well done Fia xoxo
13th Aug 2024 5:54pm
Anonymous
13th Aug 2024 6:05pm
🥺❤️
14th Aug 2024 5:16pm
Love is indeed bittersweet. Takes a lot of mutual effort to keep the bloom fresh
14th Aug 2024 5:32pm
you stole the words right out of my mouth.. ok you wrote those words way better than I can ever do
16th Aug 2024 7:17pm
