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My Sensational Charlotte,
You are the nymph, with an amazon heart,
who bears my soul through the nightmare path
of all my myopic melancholy...
whereby slack Cupid no more nocks a dart.
Stupid Cupid; the pony with one trick;
ever and anon only offering
the phlogisticated lust logistics
of a mortal man with a high strung dick...
A tensioned instrument...doomed to ruin...
like the classical columns of Delphic mount;
haughty omphalos of the male mind
seeking the beauty it must debut in...
even as it crumbles in its quest
at Aphrodite's eternal behest.
who bears my soul through the nightmare path
of all my myopic melancholy...
whereby slack Cupid no more nocks a dart.
Stupid Cupid; the pony with one trick;
ever and anon only offering
the phlogisticated lust logistics
of a mortal man with a high strung dick...
A tensioned instrument...doomed to ruin...
like the classical columns of Delphic mount;
haughty omphalos of the male mind
seeking the beauty it must debut in...
even as it crumbles in its quest
at Aphrodite's eternal behest.
Published 10th Aug 2024
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2024 2:05am
Okay, first things first: poignant, lovely write with your wonderful touch of humor (high strung dick is kind of a winner).
Phlogisticated..omphalos.... You need to compete in a Mr. Literate America contest. When you win, you can do the Miss America thing with your hands where you look like you're being electrocuted. Or maybe not.
Phlogisticated..omphalos.... You need to compete in a Mr. Literate America contest. When you win, you can do the Miss America thing with your hands where you look like you're being electrocuted. Or maybe not.
11th Aug 2024 3:09am
Lol 😆
Well, that gives me something to Google, if
nothing else, but I don't think I'm up for an electrocution just yet.
Don't mind scanning the American misses though 🥸
Well, that gives me something to Google, if
nothing else, but I don't think I'm up for an electrocution just yet.
Don't mind scanning the American misses though 🥸
Anonymous
11th Aug 2024 10:13pm
Kind of like this, although this one looks more like she's about to throw up: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9QGgSaZpc-E
LoL!
Yeah, my emo circuits are too shorted out too ever react like that, even if I won the lottery.
I was surprised at her accomplishments though. Beauty or not, she's more ambitious than I am.
But you know what they say about the ambitious. The slopes of Everest are littered with the ones who didn't make it back.
Yeah, my emo circuits are too shorted out too ever react like that, even if I won the lottery.
I was surprised at her accomplishments though. Beauty or not, she's more ambitious than I am.
But you know what they say about the ambitious. The slopes of Everest are littered with the ones who didn't make it back.
11th Aug 2024 3:58am
While I’m not sure it flows particularly well, I really rather liked this erotic piece that feels like it was force fed language from high culture. Plus “high strung dick” is an oddly perfect descriptor for some men’s sexualities haha.
11th Aug 2024 4:07am
LoL
Now if only I could force feed my dick to be as high strung as it used to be.
That's the flow I'm really missing:)
Now if only I could force feed my dick to be as high strung as it used to be.
That's the flow I'm really missing:)
11th Aug 2024 2:35pm
Thank you for sharing your dick with us
Hm. That sounded wrong.
Um, thank you for sharing your journey, and the excruciating pains in mind, body and soul. Yes, that’s less pervy.
Hey… I’m sorry this is fucking happening to you man.
Hm. That sounded wrong.
Um, thank you for sharing your journey, and the excruciating pains in mind, body and soul. Yes, that’s less pervy.
Hey… I’m sorry this is fucking happening to you man.
11th Aug 2024 2:50pm
Thanks 🙏
Maybe it's just the law of averages catching up with me, because I was having too much fun with it 🍆
Maybe it's just the law of averages catching up with me, because I was having too much fun with it 🍆
8th Sep 2024 4:59pm
"seeking the beauty it must debut in..."
Lovely way to say first time.
Oh to keep up with the female energy is a challenge (at least for me as the years have passed).
Excellent work MS
Lovely way to say first time.
Oh to keep up with the female energy is a challenge (at least for me as the years have passed).
Excellent work MS
8th Sep 2024 8:18pm
One of many things subject to the degradation of the years. Get it while you can.
