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Don’t Mess With Her
Don’t Mess With Her
She dares you to even try
To give her a bad hair day
Because she has the 80s girl moxie
Whose feathers you may ruffle
At your own risk
When she scrawls your name
In her scarlet lipstick
On the misty mirror of your heart
Telling you to get lost clown
And your puny male ego
Turns to ashes
Under the blue flame
Of her eyes
She dares you to even try
To give her a bad hair day
Because she has the 80s girl moxie
Whose feathers you may ruffle
At your own risk
When she scrawls your name
In her scarlet lipstick
On the misty mirror of your heart
Telling you to get lost clown
And your puny male ego
Turns to ashes
Under the blue flame
Of her eyes
Published 8th Aug 2024
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9th Aug 2024 2:44am
I LOVE HER. I don't even know who she is, but her moxy is charming as shit.
I love the way the narrator sees this subject, and the portrayal of a tough beauty with a blazing stare was really cool
I love the way the narrator sees this subject, and the portrayal of a tough beauty with a blazing stare was really cool
9th Aug 2024 6:56am
Betty, I had a feeling you would love this one. This woman is an old friend of mine. When she is in a no nonsense mood her eyes blaze with the fire of a warrioress that no man better mess with or she'll nail him with those eyes. Thank you so much for reading.
John
John
11th Aug 2024 1:20am
I'm an 80's chick! In middle school we teased and feathered our
waves away! I graduated high school in 93. LOL
It was a great time, and we had moxie amigo!
Even put our makeup on during class. hahah
We would be sure to sit in the far back by the outlets so if needed
we could plug in our curling iron after gym class. hahah
good times!
waves away! I graduated high school in 93. LOL
It was a great time, and we had moxie amigo!
Even put our makeup on during class. hahah
We would be sure to sit in the far back by the outlets so if needed
we could plug in our curling iron after gym class. hahah
good times!
11th Aug 2024 2:02am
I adore your memories shared here my friend. The eighties were happy times. Glad you have these memories. They touch my heart with nostalgia and fun.
John
John
14th Aug 2024 7:21am
This person was beautifully captured by you and I've never ever even met them
14th Aug 2024 8:40am
Thank you so much The PalestRider. She is beauty and fire melted together into a powerful Goddess. I am forever enthralled by her.
John
John
21st Aug 2024 2:33pm
21st Aug 2024 2:43pm
Thank you so much. Indeed, we can celebrate warrior women, just like we do the men. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks, for leaving your wonderful comment.
John
John
24th Aug 2024 9:37am
24th Aug 2024 10:46am
