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Revenge

10 years in jail made him a criminal
Originally went to the slammer for killing his sisters boyfriend
The boyfriend was no good
He would belittle, beat, rape & steal from his sister
He was also a small time criminal that was in & out of the slammer numerous times
He made many friends in the big house through the years
A few times the boyfriend threatened her brother
One time he pulled out a knife and stabbed him in the arm over a discussion at the dinner table on Thanksgiving
His parents and and the family witnessed it
She always made excuses for him
Her brother was tired of how her sister lived in fear
He had enough
One day he decided to plant a bomb underneath his car
He knew a thing or two about detonating bombs
As the sisters boyfriend began driving to his menial job, the car detonated and exploded, killing him instantly
The one problem was that the explosion occurred in town
Two pedestrians were critically wounded when the car was exploding
Car parts were flying
One particular piece that came shooting from underneath the hood hit someone right in the face
Her brother fessed up and admitted to the bomb being planted underneath the car
He had a clean record, which may have helped him receive a sentence that wasn't too bad
The problem, it was still 10 years
While in prison, he was raped, beaten and many inmates would steal his belongings
Many of these same guys were friends with the man he murdered
It was a very unpleasant 10 years
It hardened him up considerably
Eventually he became a very well respected inmate by the faculty and by the inmates
He wasn't the same man
When he was released, everyone grew older
His sister, & family were all older
His mother died while he was in prison
He had to start all over
The problem was that he didn't want to adjust and become one with society
He wanted revenge on all of those inmates that gave him hell
Some were released, while he was in prison, some weren't
The ones that were released, he began to track down
He knew now that he needed to be much more discreet
He needed to be creative
Change up the way your going to murder
And he did...
One died by burning in their home
One died by being knifed, while riding the subway
Another was bludgeoned with a crowbar while leaving the bar one night
Police started to speculate that they were all connected since they all served time in the same prison and were part of the same gang
They eventually had an eyewitness on his final killing
An eyewitness saw him pull out a gun while the targeted man was leaving a grocery store late one night
He did kill him by shooting him in the head
Eventually the cops knew where to look
He did not want to go back to jail
When he was brought in for questioning, he decided that he didn't want to go through this whole ordeal
He didn't want the stress
He was going to take his own life
One of his biggest fears was water
He couldn't swim
He went to the beach that his family would go when he was a kid
Later that night, he left behind a note for his sister and proceeded to walk himself into the ocean
No one was around
He had a chain tied around his ankle with a kettle bell that weighed 50 lbs
He walked into the ocean, carrying the weight
When the ocean bottom dropped, that's when he released the weight dragging him down into that dark, deep, ocean bottom
He died within a few moments
Written by Vision_of_insanity
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