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Shrieking Siren

broken on the rocks
old, imperfect mermaid
whacked by a paddle

Written by Pinkdreams

Published 4th Aug 2024

#aging #mermaids #sadness #sea #senryu

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Re. Shrieking Siren

4th Aug 2024 2:34am

I did not mean to laugh but you caught me off guard. Love it. Fia xoxo

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4th Aug 2024 2:41am

I laughed when I wrote it, even though it's sad- so no worries. Thanks for the RL.

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Re. Shrieking Siren

4th Aug 2024 11:00am

Fantastic write. Nicely said

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4th Aug 2024 4:30pm

Thanks!

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Re. Shrieking Siren

6th Aug 2024 5:16am

delightful Pink

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6th Aug 2024 5:28am

Thanks Wolf!

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