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Shrieking Siren

broken on the rocks
old, imperfect mermaid
whacked by a paddle
Pinkdreams
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Re. Shrieking Siren
(Fia Naturie)
4th Aug 2024 2:34am
I did not mean to laugh but you caught me off guard. Love it. Fia xoxo
fianaturie8
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Re: Re. Shrieking Siren
4th Aug 2024 2:41am
I laughed when I wrote it, even though it's sad- so no worries. Thanks for the RL.
Pinkdreams
Re. Shrieking Siren
4th Aug 2024 11:00am
Fantastic write. Nicely said
Vision_of_insanity
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Re: Re. Shrieking Siren
4th Aug 2024 4:30pm
Thanks!
Pinkdreams
Re. Shrieking Siren
(jimmy)
6th Aug 2024 5:16am
delightful Pink
goodwolf1966
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Re: Re. Shrieking Siren
6th Aug 2024 5:28am
Thanks Wolf!
Pinkdreams

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