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Self
As so many here I have been on a journey.
A journey to learn and improve my style of writing
The problem is I am starting to lose Fia.
That is not acceptable.
So, I was asked who I am
I AM FIA
I am raw when I want to be
I am sweet when I want to be
I can be an annoyance at times, but I catch myself and pull back
I am a natural encourager/ You need that push I will push soft or you need it hard well I do that too
I am not all dark
I am not all light
I swirl in the grey
If I claim you as a friend, then you are it but cross me--(Friends argue that is not what I am talking about)
I Forgot something on this journey I was set on
I forgot the essence of Fia, of me
I want to thank those who made me wake up.
A journey to learn and improve my style of writing
The problem is I am starting to lose Fia.
That is not acceptable.
So, I was asked who I am
I AM FIA
I am raw when I want to be
I am sweet when I want to be
I can be an annoyance at times, but I catch myself and pull back
I am a natural encourager/ You need that push I will push soft or you need it hard well I do that too
I am not all dark
I am not all light
I swirl in the grey
If I claim you as a friend, then you are it but cross me--(Friends argue that is not what I am talking about)
I Forgot something on this journey I was set on
I forgot the essence of Fia, of me
I want to thank those who made me wake up.
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Re. Self
2nd Aug 2024 12:28pm
Re. Self
The poet has heir own alter ego, the value that he puts in another imaginary character, while they keep the genuine container which never changes despite the later egos deviation,
so we have to know where our self ends and where our character starts, then all will be ok ....
I love this one Fia. stay safe and happy.
so we have to know where our self ends and where our character starts, then all will be ok ....
I love this one Fia. stay safe and happy.
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Re. Self
You give a lot Fia !
I would want you as a friend in real life.
But here in the vapor you're a shining light !
I like the Grey comparison.
The world is obsessed with race but here in the Underground we don't concentrate on that.
We write
That's the mission
We write and read others.
You do both extremely well !!
Keep bringing it
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
X
I would want you as a friend in real life.
But here in the vapor you're a shining light !
I like the Grey comparison.
The world is obsessed with race but here in the Underground we don't concentrate on that.
We write
That's the mission
We write and read others.
You do both extremely well !!
Keep bringing it
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
X
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Re. Self
2nd Aug 2024 1:47pm
It takes many facets to make a Diamond shine
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
Love and light
Ron xx
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re. Self
2nd Aug 2024 2:49pm
No person is only one thing. Multifaceted beings, we are. Fia is & always be part of who you are...& so much more
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Re. Self
2nd Aug 2024 2:53pm
You always encourage me. All of Fia is beautiful - don't ever lose yourself. 💜
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Re. Self
2nd Aug 2024 3:58pm
Write what is best for you. No one can be your judge. Let your mind take you on a cruise.
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Re. Self
2nd Aug 2024 5:13pm
You cannot let you lose yourself
You’re always waiting on the shelf
You must at sometimes deviate
To help you find your final fate. Xoxo
You’re always waiting on the shelf
You must at sometimes deviate
To help you find your final fate. Xoxo
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Re. Self
2nd Aug 2024 7:18pm
Are you waking up to Fia or the possibility of being you, without her? It kinda reminds me of Hanna Montana, in that film (yes, I watched it with my daughter at the cinema, lol) where she ditches her for the more 'coming of age' Miley Cyrus. Check out her song, there are 2 versions btw but this is the movie version. The link (below) is long but it works:
https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&opi=89978449&url=https://www.youtube.com/watch%3Fv%3DoMeSf6d4Xrg&ved=2ahUKEwicwtDp9NaHAxXZS0EAHRWcLfYQuAJ6BAg9EAE&usg=AOvVaw0GyNrWOqTf71-HzygZ6LIH 😊
https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&opi=89978449&url=https://www.youtube.com/watch%3Fv%3DoMeSf6d4Xrg&ved=2ahUKEwicwtDp9NaHAxXZS0EAHRWcLfYQuAJ6BAg9EAE&usg=AOvVaw0GyNrWOqTf71-HzygZ6LIH 😊
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Re. Self
5th Aug 2024 2:34am
Brilliantly written. It's easy to feel like you're losing yourself sometimes. I know it happens to me often. As long as you stay true to who you are, you'll be fine. I connect to this write. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
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