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Elysian Afternoons
It seemed like Olympus in a cloud form
busting up in the sunset silver west
after a couple days of mild storm
which gardeners and gardens know is best
for a late July renaissance of blooms;
a last minute resurrection of hope
for desiccating yard biota dooms
in drouthy dog day pollinator scope
under a sky regatta of Zephyrs
slowly prying apart the marbled puffs
drifting above the dairyland heifers
and putting greens amid the fairway ruffs,
steeped now, in Arcadian breezes blown,
as heavenly as starlet kisses sown.
busting up in the sunset silver west
after a couple days of mild storm
which gardeners and gardens know is best
for a late July renaissance of blooms;
a last minute resurrection of hope
for desiccating yard biota dooms
in drouthy dog day pollinator scope
under a sky regatta of Zephyrs
slowly prying apart the marbled puffs
drifting above the dairyland heifers
and putting greens amid the fairway ruffs,
steeped now, in Arcadian breezes blown,
as heavenly as starlet kisses sown.
Written by
MidnightSonneteer
Published 31st Jul 2024
| Edited 1st Aug 2024
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Re. Elysian Afternoons
31st Jul 2024 2:32pm
You are going to bring back the pastoral as an artistic conceit if you keep writing like this. Then instead of balls and cocks, we'll all be writing about verdant green pastures.
And then what? Huh? Extolling about the virtues of... how did you say it?
"under a sky regatta of Zephyrs
slowly prying apart the marbled puffs"
OMG. How did you say that?! It's really good.
And then what? Huh? Extolling about the virtues of... how did you say it?
"under a sky regatta of Zephyrs
slowly prying apart the marbled puffs"
OMG. How did you say that?! It's really good.
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Re: Re. Elysian Afternoons
Academia must be honest with itself and admit that pornography is a subset of the pastoral due to the pastoral depictions of ideal shag conditions, and I submit to you as evidence the googlege swirl of hits around the Longus characters of Daphnis and Chloe, beginning in late antiquity.
I also cite those old Penthouse photo spreads wherein the lass is always shown in various stages of shag friendly equestrian dishabille, often in a barn or under a tree 🌲
I also cite those old Penthouse photo spreads wherein the lass is always shown in various stages of shag friendly equestrian dishabille, often in a barn or under a tree 🌲
Re: Re. Elysian Afternoons
1st Aug 2024 1:36am
Academia concedes a point to your very valid argument. While not a Shag Mag maven during those great naturalistic naturism days, I certainly can't deny that everything in art revolves around fucking at it's truest and most ideal genesis. Everything. And until, what, the industrial revolution, almost everything was pastoral at its, ahem, root?
Long live romance on the grass, watching clouds pass by on a perfect day; and with it, the ideal premise that everyone gets laid when the camera pans away.
Long live romance on the grass, watching clouds pass by on a perfect day; and with it, the ideal premise that everyone gets laid when the camera pans away.
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Re: Re. Elysian Afternoons
Huzzah!!!
Long live the idylls of Anacreon,
among the Olympic landscapes of wine, women, and song!
Long live the idylls of Anacreon,
among the Olympic landscapes of wine, women, and song!
Re. Elysian Afternoons
1st Aug 2024 3:57am
Dear MS,
What Betty says. And I would just add I really enjoyed the write 😊
H🌷
What Betty says. And I would just add I really enjoyed the write 😊
H🌷
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Re: Re. Elysian Afternoons
1st Aug 2024 4:55am
Aye, sometimes the chaotic meteorologic elements conspire to give us those days beyond perfection, where we might be forgiven to think of ourselves as denizens of glorious Olympus! 🌹🍇🍷
Re. Elysian Afternoons
2nd Aug 2024 7:22pm
It all seems so highbrow to moi
including the comments but I
recognise ' Drouthy ' that's used
in Burn's Tam O' Shanter.
including the comments but I
recognise ' Drouthy ' that's used
in Burn's Tam O' Shanter.
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Re: Re. Elysian Afternoons
2nd Aug 2024 9:50pm
Good ole Burns 🌹
Somewhere I have a PDF copy of his more risque work, which is yet more evidence of amorous nitty gritty belonging to the pastoral category.
A well grounded chap, I hear, as at least he gave agriculture a good college try before switching careers 🤓
Somewhere I have a PDF copy of his more risque work, which is yet more evidence of amorous nitty gritty belonging to the pastoral category.
A well grounded chap, I hear, as at least he gave agriculture a good college try before switching careers 🤓
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4th Aug 2024 6:36pm
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4th Aug 2024 6:36pm
Re: Re. Elysian Afternoons
5th Aug 2024 00:01am
Thanks 🙏
Good to have you back ☺️
I may retitle this one..."convalescence".
Good to have you back ☺️
I may retitle this one..."convalescence".
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5th Aug 2024 00:10am
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Re. Elysian Afternoons
8th Sep 2024 1:12am
You conjured up colorful images in those opening lines and throughout the piece.
Well done.
Well done.
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8th Sep 2024 2:01am