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Touching Eternity
His lips felt warmer than a league
of a hundred suns.
A kiss that broke bliss
into succulent crumbs.
A fingerprint trail of ecstasy.
His breath like summer heat bleeds.
In arousing assault
of polar regions in me.
Thrust into me deeper
than the deepest deep.
Until you touch eternity.
of a hundred suns.
A kiss that broke bliss
into succulent crumbs.
A fingerprint trail of ecstasy.
His breath like summer heat bleeds.
In arousing assault
of polar regions in me.
Thrust into me deeper
than the deepest deep.
Until you touch eternity.
Author's Note
Just a day dream
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22nd Jul 2024 10:27pm
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22nd Jul 2024 10:43pm
Re. Touching Eternity
23rd Jul 2024 2:34am
Fuck the other seasons! Keep it summer all year long!
And girl?
THIS LINE?
"A kiss that broke bliss
into succulent crumbs."
FUUUUCKK! That's the line that made me lie on the bed and wish that I wrote like D-bear. It's fucking stellar.
And girl?
THIS LINE?
"A kiss that broke bliss
into succulent crumbs."
FUUUUCKK! That's the line that made me lie on the bed and wish that I wrote like D-bear. It's fucking stellar.
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23rd Jul 2024 11:14am
Aww, thank you. That means so much to me.
That was my favorite line to.
I cherish your opinion & you made me feel really good
That was my favorite line to.
I cherish your opinion & you made me feel really good
Re. Touching Eternity
23rd Jul 2024 7:22am
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23rd Jul 2024 11:15am
Re. Touching Eternity
23rd Jul 2024 11:18pm
That was warm & deep for sure. Touching eternity... wow. Has that ever been done?! 😎
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23rd Jul 2024 11:27pm
Re. Touching Eternity
24th Jul 2024 4:50pm
This poem sounds super arousing to me. A great description with such few words. Nice work Debbie.
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24th Jul 2024 5:13pm
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24th Jul 2024 5:13pm
Re. Touching Eternity
Hoi hoi
What a dreamy and tight write! Super romantic!
Love it to bits.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
What a dreamy and tight write! Super romantic!
Love it to bits.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
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26th Jul 2024 3:59pm
Re. Touching Eternity
26th Jul 2024 9:08pm
Brilliant write. Dig this a lot. Into the list it goes. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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26th Jul 2024 10:49pm