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July
The swish and hiss,
the secrets of the summer trees.
As the breeze's bliss
ruffles sun baked naked leaves.
Radiant electric blue sky.
Neon rogue clouds
hold dreams in refusal to die.
The first day of July,
was a gusty blustery day.
Sometimes,
there exists no why.
Just a way.
the secrets of the summer trees.
As the breeze's bliss
ruffles sun baked naked leaves.
Radiant electric blue sky.
Neon rogue clouds
hold dreams in refusal to die.
The first day of July,
was a gusty blustery day.
Sometimes,
there exists no why.
Just a way.
Author's Note
Sitting on my porch
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2nd Jul 2024 2:31am
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2nd Jul 2024 10:08am
Everything gels together so beautifully on this poem. It was very blustery over here as well. The bay & ocean had 3 small craft advisories. The water was kicking big time!
The poem & image reminded me of a summer day up in Maine or a state with a cooler climate. Your poems always have a peaceful, relaxing vibe. Perfect!
The poem & image reminded me of a summer day up in Maine or a state with a cooler climate. Your poems always have a peaceful, relaxing vibe. Perfect!
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2nd Jul 2024 11:21am
Sounds like a ferocious ocean. Thank you for the nice comments. I feel peace writing it, I'm glad it translates.
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2nd Jul 2024 1:00pm
Mmmmm, I need to be where you are. I’m always immersed in your writing, girl.
This is gorgeous.
This is gorgeous.
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2nd Jul 2024 1:24pm
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2nd Jul 2024 2:44pm
The imagery in this one is breathtakingly beautiful. Love the secrets and breezes in this piece 💚
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2nd Jul 2024 9:13pm
I always think the wind in the trees is whispering secrets, knows my secrets
Thank you for such a nice comment
I like to share nature with people. 🤗
Thank you for such a nice comment
I like to share nature with people. 🤗
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Anonymous
2nd Jul 2024 7:53pm
July is certainly a sizzling month. Felt that porch breeze here
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2nd Jul 2024 9:13pm
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5th Jul 2024 6:34am
Nice way to sum up the free will ambition with natural surroundings. I feel as though you're "locked in tight" with the metaphors of nature you use. You're quite definitive and expressive in using the language of nature to define emotion and spiritual disposition. I'm sure you know that already, though. Ha-ha, thanks for sharing!
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5th Jul 2024 10:39am
Thank you! I do find it easy to explain emotion through nature
Glad you enjoyed.
Glad you enjoyed.