Heart of Seasons

i do like this a lot A, it has great precision and conveys a gamut of feelings, the best one i like is the final vision of winter
"This heart
is the ache of frost
spirits enshrined in ice, screaming silences, the mouth of winter frozen open "-
-really captivating, ah yes and the title too:-)

I suspected this might be your kind of poem, Priya. I wish Spring would hurry up (a few more weeks) - but then I know it's a bit different for you. Thanks for the kind words.

and seemingly sewn together from the most gorgeous metaphors, like a string of pearls. Every line is a masterstroke, so to choose just one and praise it would be absurd, though I did adore the expression 'changeling days'. An absolute beauty:-)

Thanks for that rich praise, Jack -I appreciate your comments greatly.

A beautiful weaving of the colours and moments of the seasons into a fluid poem.

Your heart truly is rich with life!

This is high class poetry Abra

Steven

Believe it or not, this is close to the style of poetry I prefer to write. Don't ask why - maybe it has a calming effect that I find soothing. But thanks for your kind feeback - it's always appreciated, Steven.