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Hurt me
Take me roughly, take me gently, kissing lower… so much lower.
Thrusting your intentions inside me without hesitation…
Caressing deeply, take what you need from me, break me.
I want you passionately. In a dream your hands, your lips.
How sweet are the torments… Treating me without mercy.
Your tongue penetrates the intimate folds, searching deeper.
As I fly away and you are so close to the goal, so excited.
I am your passionate instrument, now trembling, confusion,
I am obsequious… Ankles, knees… Every part of me.
Stroking, biting, kissing, caressing with my hands, lips, teeth.
My crazy tongue… eager for my reward. Taking you in.
Fluids hitting me like an electric current, take me standing,
Take me from behind, And then consider me a prostitute and …
Take me, take me fifteen times, So that I crawl unable to get up.
Relentlessly, I dream again… I want you without end. Hurt me.
Thrusting your intentions inside me without hesitation…
Caressing deeply, take what you need from me, break me.
I want you passionately. In a dream your hands, your lips.
How sweet are the torments… Treating me without mercy.
Your tongue penetrates the intimate folds, searching deeper.
As I fly away and you are so close to the goal, so excited.
I am your passionate instrument, now trembling, confusion,
I am obsequious… Ankles, knees… Every part of me.
Stroking, biting, kissing, caressing with my hands, lips, teeth.
My crazy tongue… eager for my reward. Taking you in.
Fluids hitting me like an electric current, take me standing,
Take me from behind, And then consider me a prostitute and …
Take me, take me fifteen times, So that I crawl unable to get up.
Relentlessly, I dream again… I want you without end. Hurt me.
Author's Note
Hey Everyone
It’s been so long, do you remember me ? :p
So much going on this year and work truly wants to devour me in every possible way it seems. :p
Including a lot more travel at the moment… But I definitely haven’t forgotten you guys (and of course girls!!!). In my quiet moments I am still your KristinaX. 💖 My desires only increase as always it seems.
And there is more temptation than ever but you know I can’t stop thinking about sex damnit!
Tell me your thoughts, I’ve told you some of mine. ;)
It’s been so long, do you remember me ? :p
So much going on this year and work truly wants to devour me in every possible way it seems. :p
Including a lot more travel at the moment… But I definitely haven’t forgotten you guys (and of course girls!!!). In my quiet moments I am still your KristinaX. 💖 My desires only increase as always it seems.
And there is more temptation than ever but you know I can’t stop thinking about sex damnit!
Tell me your thoughts, I’ve told you some of mine. ;)
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Re. Hurt me
20th Jun 2024 9:04pm
Fanfuckingtastic my friend. How's it going? Your poem is tight & raw! XXX all the way. It's been a while since we spoke. You rock hard!!
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20th Jun 2024 9:11pm
Hell yeah! Now that's a great response. ;) It's going fast and furious, getting myself into more trouble at work. lol How's your summer going? I am burning up. I belong in cooler environments, that way I can make them hot! :p Definitely been a while, * sigh * But I love making things rock hard for sure!!! x
Re: Re. Hurt me
20th Jun 2024 9:15pm
That's ok. Piss off your superiors at your job. Fuck em! Summer is kicking ass. Beach, pool, boating, all the stuff you like to do in the summer. To hot down there, well come up to the NE where I am.
Keep on rocking Kristina!
Keep on rocking Kristina!
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Re: Re. Hurt me
20th Jun 2024 9:30pm
Oh boy! It's a complicated dynamic, sometimes you can do too good a job and get yourself in trouble that way. lol I did something for the Sales team and now they want me all the time damnit! And that isn't going over well with some others groups.
But beach, mountains, boating, lake, pool, absolutely! Love em all even if I have to be careful not to catch fire. I hate sun screen but yeah I know it's a must. Never been to NE. So you are one of the two people there? That was totally a joke... :p I bet it is really beautiful, I love nature. x
But beach, mountains, boating, lake, pool, absolutely! Love em all even if I have to be careful not to catch fire. I hate sun screen but yeah I know it's a must. Never been to NE. So you are one of the two people there? That was totally a joke... :p I bet it is really beautiful, I love nature. x
Re. Hurt me
20th Jun 2024 9:08pm
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20th Jun 2024 9:15pm
Hey Fia!!! Aww, you are a such a sweetheart! <3 I definitely love your thoughts and you really made me smile. Sorry for being such a stranger. :( I will try to write more and I really hope to be able to read some. I know I have missed a ton of awesome stuff. Thanks for the welcome back! x
Re. Hurt me
20th Jun 2024 9:18pm
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20th Jun 2024 9:41pm
Damn right I read your mind! People tell me I can read minds all the time. Maybe I just listen and observe very well. (Sometimes it seems listening is a lost art these days). And oh yeah, I can see all kinds of dirty and really nasty stuff going on in your mind Midnight! And I like it! lol x
Re. Hurt me
20th Jun 2024 9:23pm
Hello beautiful it's been a while
Great read glad you're back
Love and light
Ron xx
Great read glad you're back
Love and light
Ron xx
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20th Jun 2024 9:48pm
Ron, it's always great to see you! Time passed ridiculously fast. I can't believe it, half the year is over with. So happy you enjoyed the read and that you didn't forget me. ;) So much love and light back at ya always. x (although in regards to light I really don't mind gray and rainy days ;) ) I could even do with some snow... Take a dip in freezing water. I love the shock. Going back and forth from a sauna, or thermal pool to a cold plunge or ice cave. Why can't America have spas like in Europe (or a hell of a lot more of them) damnit! x
Re. Hurt me
20th Jun 2024 9:25pm
Hurt that pussy. Then lick it to orgasmic health. Then really show her that the real hurt is about to begin. Glad to have you back.
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Re: Re. Hurt me
20th Jun 2024 9:56pm
Hey Casket, oh yeah I bet you know all kinds of ways to hurt that ... But it's great to know you have the aftercare down too. ;) Although licking can be an incredible torture in it's own right now can't it. Oh boy! you just can't stop that orgasmic train once it starts can you? Holding the legs tight so can't get away for even a minute to breath. Damn my mind is totally distracted now damnit! (not that it takes much lol) And I really appreciate you saying you are glad to have me back a lot. That's so nice. x ;)
Re. Hurt me
20th Jun 2024 10:09pm
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20th Jun 2024 10:35pm
Hey Sam! Thanks so much for not forgetting me. ;) Oh boy! you left me speechless, I do love the sound of queen of erotica. But flirting and sex isn't supposed to get the queen in trouble right? I get in trouble even when I don't think I am flirting. ugh! Why am I always in trouble damnit! :p x
Re. Hurt me
20th Jun 2024 10:53pm
You really can pack a punch in these short pieces and yes this writing style along with yourself has been missed. It's nice to have you back and hopefully we can look forward to more of your steamy tightness.
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Re: Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 1:31am
Damn right I can pack a punch even for a little thing. :p Well I feel short anyway. lol
I love that you like my weird writing style, you guys are the best! So you missed ME? :) <3 I definitely have steamy tightness... ;) * naughty look * And always needing to tend to that. So good to see you I_IS_ME, I am so happy you didn't forget me and I really do adore what you said. x
I love that you like my weird writing style, you guys are the best! So you missed ME? :) <3 I definitely have steamy tightness... ;) * naughty look * And always needing to tend to that. So good to see you I_IS_ME, I am so happy you didn't forget me and I really do adore what you said. x
Re. Hurt me
There's sex and then there's Kx sex.
I don't think you want to confuse them.
Look at the expression on her face, it just says plunder me, ram it in, do what you have to do to get off. She'll take care of herself. Because with Kx there's violence and then some. It's not making love, it's not pretty love making. This was written to jar your senses and if you take her on and she allows you in, be ready brother to spend the night in a chamber of sensation...
All hail to the Mistress of Sex.
Our KristinaX is back to shake you and wake you and make you damn happy to be alive and bleeding....
Passion and mayhem, it doesn't get any better than this very moment of ecstasy in her skilled allowance to tear down your barriers and let you cum into her promised land.
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
I don't think you want to confuse them.
Look at the expression on her face, it just says plunder me, ram it in, do what you have to do to get off. She'll take care of herself. Because with Kx there's violence and then some. It's not making love, it's not pretty love making. This was written to jar your senses and if you take her on and she allows you in, be ready brother to spend the night in a chamber of sensation...
All hail to the Mistress of Sex.
Our KristinaX is back to shake you and wake you and make you damn happy to be alive and bleeding....
Passion and mayhem, it doesn't get any better than this very moment of ecstasy in her skilled allowance to tear down your barriers and let you cum into her promised land.
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 1:54am
Well Kx sex does scare some people...
Not trying to confuse but I suppose I can be confusing. :p
Oh I know that expression well. It says a LOT of things,
but mostly keep going!!! But I definitely want to be taken care of damnit...
However, usually taking care of someone else's deepest darkest fantasies
means I get taken care of deeply... ;)
Still I do enjoy a softer touch and slow love making too.
I truly enjoy all aspects of intimacy...
But I get off the most when the other person is,
whether that be me blowing their mind or them blowing mine.
Damn! I am speechless now... Mistress of Sex, love that.
I definitely want to make people happy to be alive and bleeding.
Yes, I didn't write all those vampire poems for nothing.
Passion and mayhem do seem to always go together don't they?
What's more fun than breaking down barriers and pushing boundaries?
Especially if you make it to the promised land...
Ah, been so long since I saw a BIG LIKE.
Thank you so much. x
Not trying to confuse but I suppose I can be confusing. :p
Oh I know that expression well. It says a LOT of things,
but mostly keep going!!! But I definitely want to be taken care of damnit...
However, usually taking care of someone else's deepest darkest fantasies
means I get taken care of deeply... ;)
Still I do enjoy a softer touch and slow love making too.
I truly enjoy all aspects of intimacy...
But I get off the most when the other person is,
whether that be me blowing their mind or them blowing mine.
Damn! I am speechless now... Mistress of Sex, love that.
I definitely want to make people happy to be alive and bleeding.
Yes, I didn't write all those vampire poems for nothing.
Passion and mayhem do seem to always go together don't they?
What's more fun than breaking down barriers and pushing boundaries?
Especially if you make it to the promised land...
Ah, been so long since I saw a BIG LIKE.
Thank you so much. x
Re: Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 1:59am
Oh yes! I love it when it hurts so good Prometheus... And I love mythology too... I am thinking about all the aspects of Prometheus; the intellectual, the trickster, the titan, a 'god' of fire, and craftsman; even of man... Makes me wonder... What do you think your strongest trait is? Because that's a lot of stuff. ;) x
Re: Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 10:41am
I am an Aquarius, so my nature is to pour from my cup into the cups of others, so I think I adopted Prometheus because of his compassion for humans and willingness to suffer for them. I also always wanted to know how the world worked, especially people, so I have pursued knowledge hoping to attain a Promethean ability to "see" the future.
Appreciate the thoughtfulness of your reply, and I want you to know that I would never hurt you any more than you wanted me to.
Appreciate the thoughtfulness of your reply, and I want you to know that I would never hurt you any more than you wanted me to.
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Re: Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 4:48pm
Ah Aquarius does have boundary breaking impulses now don't they?
That's a very good trait to have, and somewhat rarer these days. I am a pleaser and very empathetic so I know what you are talking about. It really feels good to be able to help other people. I think seeing the future is largely about listening and observing, and the ability to assemble information in unconventional ways; something I have to do a lot at my job. I appreciate that regarding not hurting more than... There is definitely an 'understanding' when it comes to things like BDSM and more intense activities... Not that I have ever need a safe word. :p
That's a very good trait to have, and somewhat rarer these days. I am a pleaser and very empathetic so I know what you are talking about. It really feels good to be able to help other people. I think seeing the future is largely about listening and observing, and the ability to assemble information in unconventional ways; something I have to do a lot at my job. I appreciate that regarding not hurting more than... There is definitely an 'understanding' when it comes to things like BDSM and more intense activities... Not that I have ever need a safe word. :p
Re: Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 7:47pm
You'd be safe with me!
Listening, observing and processing information are excellent skills to develop.
Listening, observing and processing information are excellent skills to develop.
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Re: Re. Hurt me
24th Jun 2024 00:36am
Ah, not too safe I hope. :p
Oh God! in my job those skills are absolutely vital...
Oh God! in my job those skills are absolutely vital...
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24th Jun 2024 11:19am
Based on reading your poetry, I believe you have all I mentioned and more!
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Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 10:33am
Dear K,
There you are! So happy to see you. The demands of work can be brutal but it’s nice when we can share an outlet for the stressors. Oh to be devoured in such a fashion…and I’ll leave it there 😊
H🌷
There you are! So happy to see you. The demands of work can be brutal but it’s nice when we can share an outlet for the stressors. Oh to be devoured in such a fashion…and I’ll leave it there 😊
H🌷
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21st Jun 2024 4:51pm
Hey Honoria!!! So happy to see you too and I hope you have been having a great year and some fun! Oh God, work is really trying to devour my body and soul (well and mind too lol). And what better outlet is there than sex for the stressors. :p For that matter I get stressed without it. lol Hell yes! we need to be devoured in that fashion for sure... Men really need to take the initiative and... umm, push the boundaries (a lot)... ;) x
Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 12:37pm
Wonderful work K , when you come back with sultry write such as this people will not forget you.
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Re: Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 4:52pm
Well hey UTR, you have been staying under the radar haven't you... So glad you decided to stop in and see me though and I definitely don't want you to forget me damnit! ;) So how's life treating you? It's so beautiful over there... I really miss the UK. x
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23rd Jun 2024 12:16pm
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24th Jun 2024 00:31am
The UK has so many awesome parts but that one is definitely awesome and amazing. I absolutely love wondering those little alleyways... and getting up to some very naughty mischief... ;)
Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 2:14pm
Thrilling title
You’re one of these women whom men want to hurt.
Notch in the belt experiences.
I’m pretty wild but no match for your jaded needs.
I’d take you hostage and fuck you until there was nothing left of either of us except blood, bones and cum …
You’re one of these women whom men want to hurt.
Notch in the belt experiences.
I’m pretty wild but no match for your jaded needs.
I’d take you hostage and fuck you until there was nothing left of either of us except blood, bones and cum …
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Re: Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 4:57pm
Oh God! If you only knew, yes some men have always wanted to hurt me it seems. Good thing I have a high tolerance for pain but there is a lot of history there. And it seems everyone wants those notch in the belt experiences for sure... And traveling seems to be seen as an open 'invitation' with lots of temptation, ugh! (but let's not talk about all that). * innocent look * I have been called wild a lot. :p ah, jaded needs is another subject isn't it? Blood, bones, and cum; now that is definitely write for sure... Maybe you should write that one for me. Or maybe I should write it... :p x
Re: Re. Hurt me
24th Jun 2024 00:38am
Let’s write it together…
I don’t think you’re innocent but I also think you’re constantly misunderstood. My cousin Poetspeak told me about your writing and that’s when I started to read you. He has amazing perception about genius writing and cough, you do fit in that category …
Yeah, we should collaborate sometime Kx …
I don’t think you’re innocent but I also think you’re constantly misunderstood. My cousin Poetspeak told me about your writing and that’s when I started to read you. He has amazing perception about genius writing and cough, you do fit in that category …
Yeah, we should collaborate sometime Kx …
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Re: Re. Hurt me
24th Jun 2024 00:48am
That could work...
Definitely not innocent but there is a lot of history there, definitely misunderstood.
Well that's quite a category, damn!
:) I can't remember my last collaboration... :(
Definitely not innocent but there is a lot of history there, definitely misunderstood.
Well that's quite a category, damn!
:) I can't remember my last collaboration... :(
Re: Re. Hurt me
7th Aug 2024 3:07pm
I get along well with women who are misunderstood... it's bad girl on the half shell stuff.
We should collaborate, winners in losing and total satisfaction...
We should collaborate, winners in losing and total satisfaction...
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Re: Re. Hurt me
7th Aug 2024 4:14pm
Misunderstood, then I have got you covered there... People do tend to make assumptions. I haven't done a collaboration in forever so maybe it's time. :)
Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 3:45pm
... 🤔...
It got me thinking...
Should I read your work with Freudian eyes penetrating the verses?
"... Fluids hitting me like an electric current,... ... Relentlessly, I dream again… "
Philip K. Dick's 1968 novel ?. I'd change the title; *Do Androids Dream of Electric ... Lovemaking*?
Philip K. Dick's *Electric Dreams*
😍👍😉
... ... ...
It got me thinking...
Should I read your work with Freudian eyes penetrating the verses?
"... Fluids hitting me like an electric current,... ... Relentlessly, I dream again… "
Philip K. Dick's 1968 novel ?. I'd change the title; *Do Androids Dream of Electric ... Lovemaking*?
Philip K. Dick's *Electric Dreams*
😍👍😉
... ... ...
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Re: Re. Hurt me
21st Jun 2024 4:59pm
I am all about getting people thinking. ;) I certainly don't mind a good set of Freudian eyes penetrating my verses... and... other things... Oh wow, you gave me something new to read that's very cool, thank you! I think AI Androids will enjoy lovemaking! Without AI probably not but we might! :p Electric Dreams is another great title for a write... I bet you could do something awesome with that. ;) x
Re: Re. Hurt me
22nd Jun 2024 11:59pm
You're welcome, KristinaX.
Another interesting title?... Gary Numan's song *Are My Friends Electric*
... 👍
Another interesting title?... Gary Numan's song *Are My Friends Electric*
... 👍
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Re: Re. Hurt me
24th Jun 2024 00:34am
Very cool... just listened to the live video at Brixton Academy... looked like a great show! Thanks again for your awesome recommendations Marks... Love it.
Re. Hurt me
22nd Jun 2024 2:40am
First your booty hole needs to be fucked until you are in orgasmic bliss and then tour sexy pussy needs to be fucked really hard all day and night long. You feel good and you won't get up for 2 days. Keep on writing my beautiful strong smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Hurt me
24th Jun 2024 00:30am
Who doesn't love orgasmic bliss... and there are so many ways to achieve it and so many different feelings in each of those ways... mmmm... Not getting up for two days sounds like a fantastic weekend to me. ;) I will try not to be such a stranger and thank you so much for the wonderful compliments. Beautiful strong smart sexy is the best way to be isn't it? ;) x
Re. Hurt me
26th Jun 2024 1:13am
So glad you brought your sexy voice back to these pages. This was a hot piece!
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Re: Re. Hurt me
26th Jun 2024 6:55pm
Hey there RPM... So good to see you, it's definitely been a while. And I love that you like my sexy voice. ;) That reminds me I have not done a reading in a long time. I was so hesitant to do that, maybe I was worried my voice wasn't sexy enough. :p And I love being a hot piece, I mean that you think this is hot piece. ;) x
Re. Hurt me
4th Jul 2024 5:45pm
Wild pic _ you modeling again? 😉
As Great White says in their song, Once Bitten Twice Shy. “…By the look in her eye, she was giving what she got…”
Your fascinating skill set of converting extreme sexual / domination into erotica. The theme of needing to be broken to be liberated mentally and sexually. Fabulous description of wants and feelings throughout the poem. The pain and subjugation taking you from the mundane to livid cognizance; rewarding your dominator with unbridled lascivious, passionate nooky. At some near point in the future, you’ll need another installment; but your dominator, now addicted, will need it more than you.
Happy 4th of July Ms. X. 🚀🎆
As Great White says in their song, Once Bitten Twice Shy. “…By the look in her eye, she was giving what she got…”
Your fascinating skill set of converting extreme sexual / domination into erotica. The theme of needing to be broken to be liberated mentally and sexually. Fabulous description of wants and feelings throughout the poem. The pain and subjugation taking you from the mundane to livid cognizance; rewarding your dominator with unbridled lascivious, passionate nooky. At some near point in the future, you’ll need another installment; but your dominator, now addicted, will need it more than you.
Happy 4th of July Ms. X. 🚀🎆
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5th Aug 2024 1:13am
Hey DaVinci... Wow, I am so sorry for the eternity it took me to respond. Geez. Yes, modeling again. lol
Once Bitten Twice Shy what an awesome song... Haha, you better believe I give more than I get. ;)
Well extreme sexual / domination / submission is something I definitely know about my dear DaVinci. There is something about submitting completely that is so damn liberating. You can let go of everything else in those moments. Completely at the mercy of someone else's fantasies that just happen to be yours too. And my reward comes in the most extreme ways... pun intended. Always in need of another session to keep me properly crazy. And of yes the dominator is always addicted, and the addiction on grows and grows. x
Once Bitten Twice Shy what an awesome song... Haha, you better believe I give more than I get. ;)
Well extreme sexual / domination / submission is something I definitely know about my dear DaVinci. There is something about submitting completely that is so damn liberating. You can let go of everything else in those moments. Completely at the mercy of someone else's fantasies that just happen to be yours too. And my reward comes in the most extreme ways... pun intended. Always in need of another session to keep me properly crazy. And of yes the dominator is always addicted, and the addiction on grows and grows. x
Re. Hurt me
7th Aug 2024 12:31pm
Wow! That was some hot poem...wonderfully described.Easy to imagine...
15 times??? ;-) Oh my!
15 times??? ;-) Oh my!
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Re: Re. Hurt me
7th Aug 2024 1:43pm
I love a good Wow! And putting images in people's minds that make them want to go 15 times because I have needs damnit. So many needs... x
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7th Aug 2024 2:54pm
Re. Hurt me
28th Aug 2024 00:21am
Absolutely outstanding Kristina.
"I am obsequious… Ankles, knees… Every part of me." This line read with so much profound passion and surrender, it was both beautiful and completely erotic.
Great work
"I am obsequious… Ankles, knees… Every part of me." This line read with so much profound passion and surrender, it was both beautiful and completely erotic.
Great work
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28th Aug 2024 2:45pm
Hey Wally, I am glad you really felt that line and what I intended, the profound passion and surrender. I also feel it is beautiful and completely erotic and that is certainly what I was trying to convey. 'Absolutely outstanding' makes me feel really good. :) x