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enigma
the empty darkness of the void was spread
something was fluttering between the pure black walls
a warm echo was heard
when its dry door was knocked,
a little moisture came out of it
a rough key was used
and the door broke
the abyss could not be more beautiful than this
the darkness was hanging on a rope
the free branches were swaying
the flies were flying with vanilla in their wings
the sensual horses were jumping and swimming
the two honey-colored pearls were intoxicating
the suspicious eyes burst with jealousy
A shining armor made an entry
Strength was gathered to welcome a different tomorrow
the shadow that created saltiness exploded
the virgin river attained perfection
it celebrated, rejecting the obstacles of the future
the silver waterfalls flowed freely
the rainbows of infinite beauty froze on the boobs
in some moments sadness was alternated
a constantly yearning happiness was nurtured
in some special moments of clarity trust, respect, adoration were given...
something was fluttering between the pure black walls
a warm echo was heard
when its dry door was knocked,
a little moisture came out of it
a rough key was used
and the door broke
the abyss could not be more beautiful than this
the darkness was hanging on a rope
the free branches were swaying
the flies were flying with vanilla in their wings
the sensual horses were jumping and swimming
the two honey-colored pearls were intoxicating
the suspicious eyes burst with jealousy
A shining armor made an entry
Strength was gathered to welcome a different tomorrow
the shadow that created saltiness exploded
the virgin river attained perfection
it celebrated, rejecting the obstacles of the future
the silver waterfalls flowed freely
the rainbows of infinite beauty froze on the boobs
in some moments sadness was alternated
a constantly yearning happiness was nurtured
in some special moments of clarity trust, respect, adoration were given...
Published 20th Jun 2024
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Anonymous
20th Jun 2024 9:31am
Beautifully written ❤️
20th Jun 2024 12:54pm
20th Jun 2024 3:01pm
You should get an award for these metaphors your painting across the page, Dimpy.
"the silver waterfalls flowed freely." What a beautiful line and thought.
This is sexy and erotic for sure.
"the silver waterfalls flowed freely." What a beautiful line and thought.
This is sexy and erotic for sure.
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1st Jul 2024 6:01pm
If you removed “the” at the beginning of sentences this would be more explosive reading. Very nice scribe.
3rd Jul 2024 10:29am
