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THE PASSION POND
When you respond,
the passion pond
shows you're ready
to let me be
swirling around
in, as we pound
ourselves into
a beast backs-two.
the passion pond
shows you're ready
to let me be
swirling around
in, as we pound
ourselves into
a beast backs-two.
Published 17th Jun 2024
Author's Note
Inspired by Fianaturie8's 'Passion Pond', where I picked the word up. A first attempt to make a poem from the words. Imagined from the man's POV.
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