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Egotistical
People value me,
Because they think,
I'll give them things.
Beauty and brains,
And constant mind games
People value me
Because of how I think.
Never let them in.
They are bad omens.
People value me
Because they're full of,
Jealousy.
A stray dog on the loose.
A cat and mouse; no truce.
People value me
Because they are disinteresting.
Someone who gets ignored,
Because they are a bore.
People value me
Because they know I am,
Something.
Beauty and the beast.
The last supper; they feast.
People value me
Because they think I am,
Pretty.
Confident and free.
Egotistical indeed.
Because they think,
I'll give them things.
Beauty and brains,
And constant mind games
People value me
Because of how I think.
Never let them in.
They are bad omens.
People value me
Because they're full of,
Jealousy.
A stray dog on the loose.
A cat and mouse; no truce.
People value me
Because they are disinteresting.
Someone who gets ignored,
Because they are a bore.
People value me
Because they know I am,
Something.
Beauty and the beast.
The last supper; they feast.
People value me
Because they think I am,
Pretty.
Confident and free.
Egotistical indeed.
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Re. Egotistical
13th Jun 2024 8:05pm
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13th Jun 2024 8:14pm
Re. Egotistical
13th Jun 2024 8:19pm
Hello ASD. This poem is solid! A self righteous poem. The rhymes kick ass!! Mind games, what about physical games?
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Re: Re. Egotistical
14th Jun 2024 12:04pm
Haha thanks for your thoughts. It's just battles I have to deal with at work. Guys don't quite have to deal with what girls deal with as much
Re: Re. Egotistical
14th Jun 2024 12:26pm
That's what they say. Men are from Mars and woman are from Uranus or something like that.
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14th Jun 2024 12:28pm
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14th Jun 2024 12:30pm
Well then let me push you out! I'd like to meet you, not flush you down into the ground
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14th Jun 2024 12:04pm
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13th Jun 2024 11:06pm
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14th Jun 2024 12:04pm
Re. Egotistical
14th Jun 2024 1:08am
It is amazing at what people put value in. Very good piece of poetry. Fia xoxo
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14th Jun 2024 12:05pm
Re. Egotistical
14th Jun 2024 12:57pm
If we do not value ourselves who else can do it?
Being honest ans straight shuts the door at any misinterpretation that can be....
But too much self esteem may even cause rejection from the outside...
Humanity prevails always !!!
Thanks for sharing.....
Being honest ans straight shuts the door at any misinterpretation that can be....
But too much self esteem may even cause rejection from the outside...
Humanity prevails always !!!
Thanks for sharing.....
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14th Jun 2024 1:00pm
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14th Jun 2024 1:01pm