Dim

Nothing lasts forever. Perhaps only in our minds. I certainly gauged that impression here & got a strange sense of comfort that there did once exist happier days. It doesn't always have to commute as torture, surely? It's the natural cycle of things. But yes, you have the right to feel tortured, bereaved, etc but sometimes past memories bring us joy also. That's all I'm sayin'! 😊

Thank you for your thoughts. Yes many many memories bring joy. I began writing this yesterday
upon hearing my crow friend and the clouds were grim. Not tortured, just sad.
Thx for stopping bye & reminding me there is joy too.

What a dark piece of poetry this morning. I love it. Your words and image create such atmosphere. Brilliant.
If you are feeling dim today, get outside and enjoy nature. That can help.

Thank you! Yup I'm feeling dark. But the sun is shining
Maybe some brighter words later

Yeah it's gorgeous out over here. Low humidity and just pleasant. Definitely try & get outside today.

Gorgeous here too. Thank you for caring, means a lot. 🤗

xoxoxo

So hard when the light is dimmed...by absence or simple melancholy. It's greyness almost has weight, doesn't it? Feeling this one this morning

Yes the grey reflects the grey atmosphere in the mind.
It is heavy. But sunshine usually saves me
Thank you for your thoughts!

Behind the crow
There is a sparrow, can you see?
Flapping around, doing miraculous things
just being free.;)

I hope you smiled on that one. We all have our dark days, and we need to go through it just to appreciate the light when it decides to show. Love the piece. Fia xoxo

I love that! Thank you. I did smile 😊
Thanks so much for your response, I loved it.

I know you like nature.<3

There's an eerie comfort in the caw of a crow. Wise birds. If only we could translate their message. Wonder what we'd learn

I know exactly what you mean. They know more than us, lol
Thx for checking out!

I felt every word of this. Wonderful work as always. I hope you feel better soon.

Thanks so very much for your kindness.

You are more than welcome, beautiful lady!

Expressed beautifully.

LJ

That's so nice, thank you very much!

I know this feeling of dim with the irony of light outside.

Wishing for brighter days for you, and leaving a flower to your tomb.. paying respects...

♡

Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot to me.

Wowzers, Debbie! you knocked the sock off the crow with this. Well scribbled my friend.

You make me smile, thank you! 😊

This one is dark, but descriptive.  The inevitable horror and nightmare of abandonment seem to show up here.  You use articulate and specific language to depict the atmosphere here.  Good job, overall.

Thank you so much!