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Patience
there's always
layers beneath
what you see
for example
the bond with
my guy is very
solid yet asks
for quite a lot
of patience us
Both having to
deal with a long
road to recovery
and low energy
i believe in us
in this sincere
connection of
soul and body
the respect he
shows & for that
he's worth the wait
layers beneath
what you see
for example
the bond with
my guy is very
solid yet asks
for quite a lot
of patience us
Both having to
deal with a long
road to recovery
and low energy
i believe in us
in this sincere
connection of
soul and body
the respect he
shows & for that
he's worth the wait
Published 10th Jun 2024
Author's Note
Guns N' Roses - Patience.
https://youtu.be/ErvgV4P6Fzc
https://youtu.be/ErvgV4P6Fzc
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2024 2:08pm
Patients, trust, and persistence aren't always easy to attain among character traits. Especially when there are personal battles to face.
When you find someone who has them, hold on, don't let go, and count your blessings.
Nice one D.
When you find someone who has them, hold on, don't let go, and count your blessings.
Nice one D.
10th Jun 2024 3:36pm
You are so right, it's not always easy though it does strengthen the connection we have.
And trust me, I do count my blessings. Thanks heaps for your comment, Tim :-)
And trust me, I do count my blessings. Thanks heaps for your comment, Tim :-)
10th Jun 2024 2:19pm
Patience is a wonderful thing when you can share it with the right person.
Beautiful poem and I love the love entanglement image
Beautiful poem and I love the love entanglement image
10th Jun 2024 3:36pm
It truly is. Thanks heaps for your comment & for loving the image, I love that one too :-)
10th Jun 2024 2:20pm
It seems like a lot of people do not have patience these days. Beautiful read. Fia xoxo
So true, it seems like dating has become fast food. Thanks heaps for your comment :-)
10th Jun 2024 3:39pm
10th Jun 2024 3:50pm
Anonymous
10th Jun 2024 3:47pm
Patience is priceless. It's the glue that holds us together. Beautifully written
10th Jun 2024 3:58pm
It truly is. Far from easy, but worth the wait. Thanks for dropping by, I appreciate it :-)
10th Jun 2024 4:51pm
Those moments when patience is being tested are a challenge. But the rewards are so worth it when you make it through. So very happy for you, sis 💖
11th Jun 2024 7:46am
It's a challenge for sure, but we will definitely make it through. Thanks for your support, sis 💖
10th Jun 2024 5:36pm
Firstly, I love the song, it's one of my favorites. Secondly, I really enjoyed this intimate glimpse into your life.
Just one thing tripped me up:
for quite a lot
of patience [ from ] us
Just one thing tripped me up:
for quite a lot
of patience [ from ] us
11th Jun 2024 7:53am
It's one of my favorite songs too. I can imagine that part tripped you up, but I know what it means, so it stays :-) Thanks for your comment and feedback, Ahavati, I appreciate it.
10th Jun 2024 7:41pm
11th Jun 2024 7:53am
13th Jun 2024 5:23am
Dear D,
The message is a solid one. Waiting is worth the anticipation as a solid foundation is built. For me, this is such an important part of a relationship. That trust as you get to know someone. Your writing of this is such a lovely and generous one to share. H🌷
The message is a solid one. Waiting is worth the anticipation as a solid foundation is built. For me, this is such an important part of a relationship. That trust as you get to know someone. Your writing of this is such a lovely and generous one to share. H🌷
13th Jun 2024 9:58am
Waiting and having patience is very hard, but he's definitely worth the wait. We also get to know each other so much better. Thanks heaps for your beautiful comments :-)
"Your writing of this is such a lovely and generous one to share" > this is priceless 💕
"Your writing of this is such a lovely and generous one to share" > this is priceless 💕
