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Patience
there's always
layers beneath
what you see
for example
the bond with
my guy is very
solid yet asks
for quite a lot
of patience us
Both having to
deal with a long
road to recovery
and low energy
i believe in us
in this sincere
connection of
soul and body
the respect he
shows & for that
he's worth the wait
layers beneath
what you see
for example
the bond with
my guy is very
solid yet asks
for quite a lot
of patience us
Both having to
deal with a long
road to recovery
and low energy
i believe in us
in this sincere
connection of
soul and body
the respect he
shows & for that
he's worth the wait
Published 10th Jun 2024
Author's Note
Guns N' Roses - Patience.
https://youtu.be/ErvgV4P6Fzc
https://youtu.be/ErvgV4P6Fzc
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- Edited 19th Dec 2024 5:45pm
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10th Jun 2024 3:36pm
You are so right, it's not always easy though it does strengthen the connection we have.
And trust me, I do count my blessings. Thanks heaps for your comment, Tim :-)
And trust me, I do count my blessings. Thanks heaps for your comment, Tim :-)
10th Jun 2024 2:19pm
Patience is a wonderful thing when you can share it with the right person.
Beautiful poem and I love the love entanglement image
Beautiful poem and I love the love entanglement image
10th Jun 2024 3:36pm
It truly is. Thanks heaps for your comment & for loving the image, I love that one too :-)
10th Jun 2024 2:20pm
It seems like a lot of people do not have patience these days. Beautiful read. Fia xoxo
So true, it seems like dating has become fast food. Thanks heaps for your comment :-)
10th Jun 2024 3:39pm
10th Jun 2024 3:50pm
Anonymous
10th Jun 2024 3:47pm
Patience is priceless. It's the glue that holds us together. Beautifully written
10th Jun 2024 3:58pm
It truly is. Far from easy, but worth the wait. Thanks for dropping by, I appreciate it :-)
10th Jun 2024 4:51pm
Those moments when patience is being tested are a challenge. But the rewards are so worth it when you make it through. So very happy for you, sis 💖
11th Jun 2024 7:46am
It's a challenge for sure, but we will definitely make it through. Thanks for your support, sis 💖
10th Jun 2024 5:36pm
Firstly, I love the song, it's one of my favorites. Secondly, I really enjoyed this intimate glimpse into your life.
Just one thing tripped me up:
for quite a lot
of patience [ from ] us
Just one thing tripped me up:
for quite a lot
of patience [ from ] us
11th Jun 2024 7:53am
It's one of my favorite songs too. I can imagine that part tripped you up, but I know what it means, so it stays :-) Thanks for your comment and feedback, Ahavati, I appreciate it.
10th Jun 2024 7:41pm
11th Jun 2024 7:53am
13th Jun 2024 5:23am
Dear D,
The message is a solid one. Waiting is worth the anticipation as a solid foundation is built. For me, this is such an important part of a relationship. That trust as you get to know someone. Your writing of this is such a lovely and generous one to share. H🌷
The message is a solid one. Waiting is worth the anticipation as a solid foundation is built. For me, this is such an important part of a relationship. That trust as you get to know someone. Your writing of this is such a lovely and generous one to share. H🌷
13th Jun 2024 9:58am
Waiting and having patience is very hard, but he's definitely worth the wait. We also get to know each other so much better. Thanks heaps for your beautiful comments :-)
"Your writing of this is such a lovely and generous one to share" > this is priceless 💕
"Your writing of this is such a lovely and generous one to share" > this is priceless 💕
