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Tender Sensibility
Humanity in steady decline
All intelligence is grown artificially
Housed in boxes made of pine
Been put out to pasture officially
We outstayed our own welcome
In this biological cul-de-sac
Hatred held belief for ransom
While the weight broke our back
Exposing this grand conspiracy
The government coined it a theory
They don’t deal in transparency
When they can simply rewrite history
Once they take control of the narrative
By destroying all forms of credibility
When death is easier than to live
Feasting on every tender sensibility
All intelligence is grown artificially
Housed in boxes made of pine
Been put out to pasture officially
We outstayed our own welcome
In this biological cul-de-sac
Hatred held belief for ransom
While the weight broke our back
Exposing this grand conspiracy
The government coined it a theory
They don’t deal in transparency
When they can simply rewrite history
Once they take control of the narrative
By destroying all forms of credibility
When death is easier than to live
Feasting on every tender sensibility
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2nd Jun 2024 4:40am
Charmed,
Thanks for the comment. Unfortunately, the world gets me down sometimes. Appreciate you.
DL
Thanks for the comment. Unfortunately, the world gets me down sometimes. Appreciate you.
DL
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2nd Jun 2024 4:47am
Brandy,
Thank you! It's nice to meet you. Sometimes, it's fun to escape reality.
DL
Thank you! It's nice to meet you. Sometimes, it's fun to escape reality.
DL
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Re. Tender Sensibility
2nd Jun 2024 5:04am
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2nd Jun 2024 5:12am
Fia,
Thanks, for your commentary. Appreciate you, and the reading list add.
DL
Thanks, for your commentary. Appreciate you, and the reading list add.
DL
Re. Tender Sensibility
2nd Jun 2024 2:59pm
I was just talking about how I wish protest poetry would make a strong comeback. You surely got my hopes up! Thanks for sharing and welcome to DUP xx
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3rd Jun 2024 2:19am
Isgyppie,
Thanks, for your commentary. And for the welcome. Appreciate you.
DL
Thanks, for your commentary. And for the welcome. Appreciate you.
DL
Re. Tender Sensibility
3rd Jun 2024 5:59am
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3rd Jun 2024 6:07am
Re. Tender Sensibility
3rd Jun 2024 10:26am
5 extinctions in the history of our Earth all of them natural causes. The 6th will be man made. The stupid extinction.
An impressive debut.
An impressive debut.
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4th Jun 2024 3:21am
Re. Tender Sensibility
4th Jun 2024 4:42am
Don't even get me started about AI.
I guess we should be excited about the potential benefits, but all I can think about is "Terminator". Damn good movie, though. Watch out for those cyborgs.
I'm a big Stephen King fan. He has expanded on the subject a few times. Plenty of allusions in the literature across the board.
I'm all about conspiracy too. I mean, who seriously believes John Kennedy was killed by a single bullet? Feed me some more shit, please. We've got aliens from other galaxies in high governmental positions. Somebody keeps killing people who invent engines that run on water. It goes on and on.
Welcome to DUP. We have all the answers.
Meg
xoxo
I guess we should be excited about the potential benefits, but all I can think about is "Terminator". Damn good movie, though. Watch out for those cyborgs.
I'm a big Stephen King fan. He has expanded on the subject a few times. Plenty of allusions in the literature across the board.
I'm all about conspiracy too. I mean, who seriously believes John Kennedy was killed by a single bullet? Feed me some more shit, please. We've got aliens from other galaxies in high governmental positions. Somebody keeps killing people who invent engines that run on water. It goes on and on.
Welcome to DUP. We have all the answers.
Meg
xoxo
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4th Jun 2024 7:32am
Meg,
Such brilliant commentary. I enjoy Stephen King, as well. Also dig the Terminator. Nice, to meet you. Appreciate you.
DL
Such brilliant commentary. I enjoy Stephen King, as well. Also dig the Terminator. Nice, to meet you. Appreciate you.
DL
Re. Tender Sensibility
4th Jun 2024 1:59pm
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5th Jun 2024 3:45am
Great
4th Jun 2024 2:32pm
It is sad how even Google personalizes everyone's searches so everyone has different information to keep everyone arguing and distracted. If only we could go back to the time where all the knowledge was in libraries in old books
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5th Jun 2024 3:46am
Re. Tender Sensibility
6th Jun 2024 9:55pm
This is so wonderfully expressed. I can relate. The world
as it is, is driving me crazy. Thank God for my ability to write. It's kept me in this life.
Great poem.
Welcome to DUP.
as it is, is driving me crazy. Thank God for my ability to write. It's kept me in this life.
Great poem.
Welcome to DUP.
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Re: Re. Tender Sensibility
6th Jun 2024 10:53pm
Thanks so much. For the read, the welcome, and the RL. So glad you can relate. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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7th Jun 2024 00:11am
Re. Tender Sensibility
21st Feb 2025 10:46am
This is one amazing and powerful write for your 1st poem here Damian. Wonderfully put and exceptionally grand. I don't need to welcome you at this point, but I'm glad we've met.
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Re: Re. Tender Sensibility
22nd Feb 2025 3:59am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Patient zero, and I'm still talking about it with the same flare in present day. I'm glad we met as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Tender Sensibility
23rd Mar 2025 4:31am
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23rd Mar 2025 4:56am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. Always honored to make your RL, my friend. Much respect to you as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian