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green eye
angered by the moonlight
a star fell on the ground
in the pitch darkness
i found it filled with the
stimulating scent of lavender
in my messy courtyard
i hung it on the wall of my house
i was tasting it with surprising eyes
the wall couldn't bear it
within some moments
the star fell on the ground
n the abyss glowed with light...
a star fell on the ground
in the pitch darkness
i found it filled with the
stimulating scent of lavender
in my messy courtyard
i hung it on the wall of my house
i was tasting it with surprising eyes
the wall couldn't bear it
within some moments
the star fell on the ground
n the abyss glowed with light...
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Re. green eye
22nd May 2024 1:14pm
Isn’t the wonder of dreams so delish? They only have to make sense to us.
I found this to be full of hope. I love it, dimpy.
I found this to be full of hope. I love it, dimpy.
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Re: Re. green eye
22nd May 2024 1:44pm
Re. green eye
22nd May 2024 1:59pm
Favorite line
"stimulating scent of lavender"
Bringing scent into it was lovely
Fia xoxo
"stimulating scent of lavender"
Bringing scent into it was lovely
Fia xoxo
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Re: Re. green eye
22nd May 2024 2:09pm
Re. green eye
22nd May 2024 2:22pm
Re. green eye
Anonymous
22nd May 2024 3:42pm
Dreams are a whole other universe, aren't they?
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22nd May 2024 5:22pm
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Re: Re. green eye
22nd May 2024 5:26pm
Awww my god... mam..!!!
you have enhanced the beauty of my profile by coming here...thank you so much for your gracious presence...really appreciate❤
you have enhanced the beauty of my profile by coming here...thank you so much for your gracious presence...really appreciate❤