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Summing Up The Journey
Hatching from an egg
one rarely knows what’s to come.
I molted and grew.
Went through metamorphosis
and now I just span my wings.
one rarely knows what’s to come.
I molted and grew.
Went through metamorphosis
and now I just span my wings.
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21st May 2024 4:21pm
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22nd May 2024 5:38am
Dear V,
I really enjoyed this piece. The metaphor for me was leaving behind all the ick and finally appreciating myself and what I can accomplish. That stretch of wings feels pretty good. Lovely write. H🌷
I really enjoyed this piece. The metaphor for me was leaving behind all the ick and finally appreciating myself and what I can accomplish. That stretch of wings feels pretty good. Lovely write. H🌷
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22nd May 2024 11:26am
Love... love... love this... crisp... authentic... my kind of poetry...
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24th May 2024 2:15pm
Your Tankas seem to be effortlessly executed, an evidence of the talented executor
Happiness, success, prosperity..
Happiness, success, prosperity..
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24th May 2024 2:39pm
I love how you managed to fit in the four stages. It's a kick ass tanka and your image fits perfect.
LJ
LJ
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