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Delilah
Now strikes the hour
when mischief grows
and I deliver a whisper
before night’s decaying shadow.
Come into my garden of darkness
where secrets bloom.
Lose your way in my essence,
crawl into the womb.
Let my petals caress you
revealing my true intent.
Passion travels through you
without consent.
Just under the full moon’s
delicate shine
I take over your free will
and make you mine.
when mischief grows
and I deliver a whisper
before night’s decaying shadow.
Come into my garden of darkness
where secrets bloom.
Lose your way in my essence,
crawl into the womb.
Let my petals caress you
revealing my true intent.
Passion travels through you
without consent.
Just under the full moon’s
delicate shine
I take over your free will
and make you mine.
Author's Note
Breaking away from writing sadness and heartbroken poetry.
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Re. Delilah
18th May 2024 2:33am
Re. Delilah
18th May 2024 3:09am
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18th May 2024 3:14am
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18th May 2024 11:49am
Re. Delilah
20th May 2024 8:13am
Brilliant opening verse, Shakespearean
in its timber and tenor with just a
faint hint of rhyme with the last word of shadow.
So, as your AN reads " Breaking away from writing
sadness and heartbroken poetry" is, perhaps, a good
idea to explore other scenarios, ideas and themes?
in its timber and tenor with just a
faint hint of rhyme with the last word of shadow.
So, as your AN reads " Breaking away from writing
sadness and heartbroken poetry" is, perhaps, a good
idea to explore other scenarios, ideas and themes?
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20th May 2024 6:10pm
Thank you. I'm not sure what to write about. I'll try and focus more on moving forward than standing still at 1 heartbreaking moment.
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Anonymous
20th May 2024 5:42pm
That sounds like a garden I'd like to visit. :)
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20th May 2024 6:13pm
Re. Delilah
25th May 2024 11:14pm
Re. Delilah
22nd Jun 2024 6:57am
Gently seductive, example verse:
Just under the full moon’s
delicate shine
I take over your free will
and make you mine.
Just under the full moon’s
delicate shine
I take over your free will
and make you mine.
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