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When I come to you
When I come to you
I come with no expectations
I accept all of you
Take me as I am
And enter my paradise
Dive into the warmth of my ocean
And be surrounded by
Ultimate intimacy
Will you come to me?
I come with no expectations
I accept all of you
Take me as I am
And enter my paradise
Dive into the warmth of my ocean
And be surrounded by
Ultimate intimacy
Will you come to me?
Published 17th May 2024
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17th May 2024 10:05pm
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17th May 2024 11:15pm
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18th May 2024 1:13am
Anonymous
18th May 2024 00:00am
I adore how you set forth such a sensual yet vulnerable invitation.
Beautiful.
Beautiful.
18th May 2024 1:14am
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18th May 2024 7:20am
Favourite phrase:
be surrounded by
Ultimate intimacy
Reminds me of a DJ in the 80s whose catchphrase was "feel the warmth of my sincerity".
be surrounded by
Ultimate intimacy
Reminds me of a DJ in the 80s whose catchphrase was "feel the warmth of my sincerity".
18th May 2024 12:45pm
18th May 2024 1:54pm
Such a sweet little piece. I love that it ends with a question, it's a beautiful invitation 💕
18th May 2024 1:59pm
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Anonymous
23rd May 2024 4:24pm
Good one ❤️
23rd May 2024 4:26pm
