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Cigarettes
call me insane
but i asked my
lover to stub
out a ciggy
on my body
it wasn't the
wisest choice
of guy but as
they say love
makes blind
wanted him
to brand me
make me his
keep him safe
for life with me
it didn't happen
which was for
the better, but
one day maybe
i will get that relic
& wear it with pride
but i asked my
lover to stub
out a ciggy
on my body
it wasn't the
wisest choice
of guy but as
they say love
makes blind
wanted him
to brand me
make me his
keep him safe
for life with me
it didn't happen
which was for
the better, but
one day maybe
i will get that relic
& wear it with pride
Author's Note
About my first Dominant.
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Re. Cigarettes
10th May 2024 2:05pm
Nice and edgy, I prefer to leave my mark in the heart and mind but hey, if asked, I would have.
Really current and open poem enjoyed reading it.
Really current and open poem enjoyed reading it.
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10th May 2024 4:30pm
Marks in the heart and the mind are the best, the good ones that is.
Happy to hear you enjoyed reading this, thanks heaps for your comment :-)
Happy to hear you enjoyed reading this, thanks heaps for your comment :-)
Re. Cigarettes
10th May 2024 2:10pm
Yikes, I don’t think I could….
But I definitely understand the craving, the yearning.
I nearly lost my mind with my first Dom, so yeah, I get it.
But I definitely understand the craving, the yearning.
I nearly lost my mind with my first Dom, so yeah, I get it.
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10th May 2024 4:30pm
It's certainly not everyone's kink, but glad you understand the craving :-)
I nearly lost my mind with the first one too, thanks heaps for sharing your thoughts.
I nearly lost my mind with the first one too, thanks heaps for sharing your thoughts.
Re. Cigarettes
10th May 2024 2:41pm
My ex was demanding I tattoo his name on my body. Very glad I didn't get it done. Talk about a constant reminder of a big mistake. In a way, they're all branded into us, aren't they? When the one appears who is worthy of the gift that is you...big smiles, sis! 💖
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10th May 2024 4:34pm
Oof, a tattoo with his name, that's a whole other level of permanent. I know people who've done that... and regretted it. And yes, in a way they are all branded into us.
Thanks heaps for your comment and the smiles, sis 💖
Thanks heaps for your comment and the smiles, sis 💖
Re. Cigarettes
10th May 2024 3:08pm
I wanted her to get her nipples pierced.
She thought about it, was intrigued but didn't. It wasn't a big deal. We have that kind of give and take ...
BIG
She thought about it, was intrigued but didn't. It wasn't a big deal. We have that kind of give and take ...
BIG
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Re: Re. Cigarettes
10th May 2024 4:35pm
That I've heard too. When both are comfortable about it, I say go for it.
Thanks heaps for your visit and comment, PoetSpeak.
Thanks heaps for your visit and comment, PoetSpeak.
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10th May 2024 3:21pm
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10th May 2024 6:55pm
I couldn’t do that to my partner. But if they asked me to, I imagine it would be quite the turn on. That alone made this piece intriguingly hot.
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12th May 2024 11:46am
So glad you found this piece intriguingly hot. As a fire sign I'm probably drawn to everything that burns. Thanks heaps for your comment, I appreciate it.
Re. Cigarettes
11th May 2024 1:46am
Ouch… if he does it to you ill kick his ass… even if you’re the one who asked him to.
Ok you can kick mine as much as you want … but I’ll never ever let him do it… never
Ok you can kick mine as much as you want … but I’ll never ever let him do it… never
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Re: Re. Cigarettes
12th May 2024 11:53am
I'm not gonna kick your ass, I like you too much for being so protective.
Thanks heaps for your comment and the smiles, dear poetess.
Thanks heaps for your comment and the smiles, dear poetess.
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Anonymous
- Edited 13th May 2024 3:25pm
13th May 2024 3:22pm
I've been in this situation a couple of times and in the mindset of the Dom
I still wanted to protect my Sub...but I understood the 'highs'
I would take her on...
You've opened up a great conversation in my mind Duende
Got me doing some introspection
Hopefully I'll be able to poetically articulate my thoughts
in the near future..
Big thanks for the nudge
I still wanted to protect my Sub...but I understood the 'highs'
I would take her on...
You've opened up a great conversation in my mind Duende
Got me doing some introspection
Hopefully I'll be able to poetically articulate my thoughts
in the near future..
Big thanks for the nudge
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Re: Re. Cigarettes
14th May 2024 5:58am
Wow, a couple of times even? That you want to protect your sub says a lot about you.
It's a huge gift when one of my poems brings back memories and leads to introspection.
It makes sharing even more valuable. Thanks heaps for your comment and giving me an insight in your mind. I appreciate you, Naajir.
It's a huge gift when one of my poems brings back memories and leads to introspection.
It makes sharing even more valuable. Thanks heaps for your comment and giving me an insight in your mind. I appreciate you, Naajir.