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paint me with your passion
two people
are swimming
in the pool of lusty life,
her pink lips adorned
with a warm smile
and his copper colored lips
leaving the marks of
his arousal
her tongue trusting
in and out of his mouth,
soft, then faster, harder,
faster, harder, faster and harder...
It's like the tongues
of both are circling
each other's tongues,
they trade licking and caressing
her honey-coloured hair
jerking against
his grey-haired chest
her back, covered
in purple dreams,
now exposed,
her dreams in his sweat
spreading her wings
he's filling her silky cave
with heaven
she's feeling joy with the pain
her eyes are closing
due to his passionate thrusts,
her moans are hitting
the wall and whispering
in his ears...
"I love you so much...do not leave me"
the wetness flowing
from her cave was
giving evidence of his success
they were now very close
to each other,
they didn't even speak a
single word
they didn't even ask
each other's name
both bodies were
embracing each other
and the flame of their orgasm
was now burning brighter
than the sun,
both souls were
entertaining each other's souls..
N that was enough...
are swimming
in the pool of lusty life,
her pink lips adorned
with a warm smile
and his copper colored lips
leaving the marks of
his arousal
her tongue trusting
in and out of his mouth,
soft, then faster, harder,
faster, harder, faster and harder...
It's like the tongues
of both are circling
each other's tongues,
they trade licking and caressing
her honey-coloured hair
jerking against
his grey-haired chest
her back, covered
in purple dreams,
now exposed,
her dreams in his sweat
spreading her wings
he's filling her silky cave
with heaven
she's feeling joy with the pain
her eyes are closing
due to his passionate thrusts,
her moans are hitting
the wall and whispering
in his ears...
"I love you so much...do not leave me"
the wetness flowing
from her cave was
giving evidence of his success
they were now very close
to each other,
they didn't even speak a
single word
they didn't even ask
each other's name
both bodies were
embracing each other
and the flame of their orgasm
was now burning brighter
than the sun,
both souls were
entertaining each other's souls..
N that was enough...
Published 9th May 2024
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9th May 2024 2:03pm
9th May 2024 4:45pm
"her honey-coloured hair
jerking against
his grey-haired chest" - sounds like a lucky older man there! (Suggests what is known as a "May-September" liaison. Perhaps not needing viagra?)
These lines:
"I love you so much...do not leave me"
the wetness flowing
from her cave was
giving evidence of his success
they were now very close
to each other,
they didn't even speak a
single word
they didn't even ask
each other's name
Seem to suggest a one-night encounter.
jerking against
his grey-haired chest" - sounds like a lucky older man there! (Suggests what is known as a "May-September" liaison. Perhaps not needing viagra?)
These lines:
"I love you so much...do not leave me"
the wetness flowing
from her cave was
giving evidence of his success
they were now very close
to each other,
they didn't even speak a
single word
they didn't even ask
each other's name
Seem to suggest a one-night encounter.
9th May 2024 4:48pm
He is an old man but viagra won't work on him...massage will be ok...well thanks ss
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17th May 2024 4:05am
There are some hidden inferences in this piece that are very curious. I like the vague insinuations, references to pain and pleasure, massive age difference, complete strangers who 'love each other very much'. Oddly contradicting and hugely erotic.
17th May 2024 5:58am
Thank you..n sorry for delay in reply well If two lustful people want to fulfill their desires, then I think the age difference has no meaning. I believe that it is important to satisfy the lust...
