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the rain

 
the rain fell today


                             it didn't get up


and I didn't bother to call
an
ambulance
  
  
                    
                      
buddhakitty
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Samnash
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Re. the rain
9th May 2024 3:07am
So simply brilliant.
So clever.
You don't need to write long sentences. You go straight to the exclamation points.
Styxian
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Re: Re. the rain
9th May 2024 5:14pm
Thank you so much, Styxian.!!!



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Re. the rain
(Sam Nash)
9th May 2024 1:52pm
Oh wow… this one is amazingly different…
Samnash
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Re: Re. the rain
9th May 2024 5:13pm
Thank you, Samnash. I am humbled by your praise.



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Re. the rain
9th May 2024 6:44pm
I’m still trying to pick my mouth up from the floor.
Brilliant, your words are, just brilliant.
Her
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Re: Re. the rain
9th May 2024 6:46pm
Thank you, Her. I am deeply grateful and humbled.



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Re. the rain
10th May 2024 2:23am

This was droll and delicious. Well played with those words!
Betty
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Re: Re. the rain
10th May 2024 2:24am
Many thanks, Betty.




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Re. the rain
19th Jul 2024 4:15pm
Oh Bk, you deliver quite the punch with brevity.
wallyroo92
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Re: Re. the rain
20th Jul 2024 2:34am
Thank you,  wally. Much appreciated.



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