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her bottle is open
i cannot
seem
to place
her smile
back into
the bottle,
the cork
is loose,
i gladly
pour another
glass
of her,
tasting
her vintage.
seem
to place
her smile
back into
the bottle,
the cork
is loose,
i gladly
pour another
glass
of her,
tasting
her vintage.
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Re: Re. her bottle is open
6th May 2024 7:24am
Re. her bottle is open
6th May 2024 6:13am
hello Wolf do you have visions also like me? I taste the wine withering on the vine
my dad grew up in rasin city their is some family cures I can't shake
the djinn and legion they are one now and I earned my freedom
black magic black faith came before moon white god
Lu has curly woryly hair because his voodoo mama does me
I am Goldy Locks I fought the Sun and sol pneuma I blew into them and they lived.
my dad grew up in rasin city their is some family cures I can't shake
the djinn and legion they are one now and I earned my freedom
black magic black faith came before moon white god
Lu has curly woryly hair because his voodoo mama does me
I am Goldy Locks I fought the Sun and sol pneuma I blew into them and they lived.
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Re: Re. her bottle is open
6th May 2024 7:15am
Re. her bottle is open
Anonymous
6th May 2024 4:25pm
Once it's out...it can't be bottled again, can it?
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Re: Re. her bottle is open
6th May 2024 5:12pm
Re. her bottle is open
6th May 2024 6:07pm
Re: Re. her bottle is open
6th May 2024 6:30pm
Re. her bottle is open
7th May 2024 4:26am
I just keep wondering what of her you are pouring... and so many ideas... but I can't seem to reach an answer...hm..
I do love me a nice big glass of wine though!
♡
I do love me a nice big glass of wine though!
♡
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Re: Re. her bottle is open
7th May 2024 4:50am
Re. her bottle is open
Anonymous
7th May 2024 4:33am
Nice metaphor on this one. :)
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Re: Re. her bottle is open
7th May 2024 4:51am