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Dad
Brown eyes frame thick lashes
Sad side smile that breaks her heart
Unconditional love in his hands
Sad side smile that breaks her heart
Unconditional love in his hands
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 4th May 2024
Author's Note
This is for the Haiku competition
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Dad
4th May 2024 1:58am
Fia I have no memory of you it has been ripped away from me with my heart you are my kin though of this I'm certain taste the fruits of all things and open your mind to the positive and remember karma is awake and aware in the verses and universes...positive and negative at the molecular level have you noticed you get what you give out...
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Re: Re. Dad
4th May 2024 2:25am
Re. Dad
4th May 2024 2:19am
Wow… is that your description of your dad?… unconditional love…. Those are the dads…love it
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Re: Re. Dad
4th May 2024 2:24am
Yes, it is. Tried to think of him in three stanzas. lol. Thank you Sam
Fia xoxo
Fia xoxo
Re. Dad
4th May 2024 2:21am
I'm a sworn daddy's girl. He had a crooked smile & heart of gold. Unconditional love indeed. Very nice, Fia
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Re: Re. Dad
4th May 2024 2:24am
Re: Re. Dad
4th May 2024 2:35am
this is beautiful Fia and Willow...my daddy is iron man Ronald Clyde Jensen o negative he is out there riding through space and time with a space craft and hog or hells angel bike I love him he is righting wrongs across the board he played chess I thought he wasn't smart hogs sound like thunder going down the road daddy I will be on time we got a date Gwen is safe I won't let lunacy take hold... right on ride on... I love you love baby angel age 3 brenda kay j.
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Re. Dad
4th May 2024 9:05pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely amazing 👏 queen 👸!!,
This reminds me of one my poems fatherless son!!
Please keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
This reminds me of one my poems fatherless son!!
Please keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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Re. Dad
8th May 2024 00:23am
Beautifully said Fia, it made me feel
Cut that out! ☺️
Thanks for sharing sweet woman
Jackie ♥️ xoxox
Cut that out! ☺️
Thanks for sharing sweet woman
Jackie ♥️ xoxox
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Re: Re. Dad
8th May 2024 00:29am