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Un Beso (One Kiss)
Skin
Pressure
Tongue
Taste
He leaned in I tilted my head up. For a heartbeat, we breathe in each other. Lips slightly parted, and eyes half closed.
Timid
Adventurous
Conquer
Haste
Soft gentle meld. A light sweep of the tongue asking permission to move in. Met with a yes as the other caresses the first.
Moan
Swallow
Suck
Kept pace
As the dance of tongues intensifies a sound. A sound of pleasure escapes.
A message
A promise
A vow
No waste
An unwanted parting of the mouths, punctuated with a suckling of the bottom lips.
Pressure
Tongue
Taste
He leaned in I tilted my head up. For a heartbeat, we breathe in each other. Lips slightly parted, and eyes half closed.
Timid
Adventurous
Conquer
Haste
Soft gentle meld. A light sweep of the tongue asking permission to move in. Met with a yes as the other caresses the first.
Moan
Swallow
Suck
Kept pace
As the dance of tongues intensifies a sound. A sound of pleasure escapes.
A message
A promise
A vow
No waste
An unwanted parting of the mouths, punctuated with a suckling of the bottom lips.
Published 3rd May 2024
| Edited 8th May 2024
Author's Note
The last two words "No Waste" is supposed convey, no wasted time or effort is put into a kiss.
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8th May 2024 00:33am
Oooh are you latina? Do You have.... an accent? 😁
This was really descriptive. It was like a full on close up of a tongue kiss. Well done Fia.
This was really descriptive. It was like a full on close up of a tongue kiss. Well done Fia.
8th May 2024 00:49am
Thank you. 1/4 latina. The rest from different island. I hope you get the girl with the accent. lol
Fia xoxo
Fia xoxo
8th May 2024 2:19am
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