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Life forever erased

I can't see my lucid dreams
Blindfolded
Thoughts abandoned in empty frames
Climbing stairs to chaos
I fall before I awake
Visually dying
Life forever erased

Written by Vision_of_insanity

Published 1st May 2024

#dark #despair #dreams #memories #regret

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Re. Life forever erased

LilDragonFly

1st May 2024 11:20am

Wow... this one resonates...

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Vision_of_insanity

1st May 2024 11:24am

Thank you. Appreciate the comments.

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Re. Life forever erased

Thor_Azine

1st May 2024 11:28am

Really good poetry my friend.

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Vision_of_insanity

1st May 2024 11:29am

Thank you Thor. Always appreciate you my friend.

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Re. Life forever erased

Connotation

1st May 2024 3:44pm

Kind of depressing, sad, and seemingly hopeless. I suppose it captures a sense of tragedy in that way. Like an unrealized potential, or empty promises, or lost purpose. Good job of conveying such emotion.