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i'm naked and
bent over in
front of the mirror,
pin me down and
pour your soul into my crack...
bent over in
front of the mirror,
pin me down and
pour your soul into my crack...
Published 29th Apr 2024
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Hell yes I'll tapping that until you are having a shaking orgasm. You'll be moaning with delight. Keep on writing my sexy lady.
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I think the mirror will crack from the shock... no wait.. that's me ... you just shattered me with this poem... nice one
29th Apr 2024 5:16pm
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"pour your soul in my crack" - favourite line. And in his own full mirrored view too!
30th Apr 2024 2:45am
30th Apr 2024 7:18am
Your words are hot as the strongest curry from your land! From so few lines you paint a visualisable picture in the reader's mind (like a scene from a Bollywood movie). If there were such a title awarded for erotic writers as Miss Kama Sutra I would surely nominate you!
30th Apr 2024 1:07pm
hello as
I am glad to know that you know about Bollywood... although many poets here write good erotica... but yaa you have praised me with such precious words for this I thank you from the bottom of my heart...
I am glad to know that you know about Bollywood... although many poets here write good erotica... but yaa you have praised me with such precious words for this I thank you from the bottom of my heart...
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