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Play With Me
I want you to play with me
I want to give you what you need
Put a smile that I can see
I want you to play with me
Why don’t you touch me with your hands
Let's do things with no plans
Why can’t we just be
I want you to play with me
Don’t you remember not long ago?
When we laughed and truly let go
I know how we can be
I want you to play with me
If you can't
I understand.
Offer still holds
Just take my hand
One day you will see
There is nothing wrong with playing with me.
I want to give you what you need
Put a smile that I can see
I want you to play with me
Why don’t you touch me with your hands
Let's do things with no plans
Why can’t we just be
I want you to play with me
Don’t you remember not long ago?
When we laughed and truly let go
I know how we can be
I want you to play with me
If you can't
I understand.
Offer still holds
Just take my hand
One day you will see
There is nothing wrong with playing with me.
Published 29th Apr 2024
Author's Note
As adults we rarely play. So, if I come along, this holds true. I want to play with you.. Put a smile on
your face.
your face.
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29th Apr 2024 1:16pm
As a playful creature (despite the darkness) I love this one.
The repetition of "I want you to play with me" really works.
Great write, lovely Fia 💕
The repetition of "I want you to play with me" really works.
Great write, lovely Fia 💕
29th Apr 2024 1:18pm
29th Apr 2024 2:12pm
I agree with Duende. Repetition nails down the point and creates a bit of excitement when hearing the words more than once. Nice one, Fia.
29th Apr 2024 2:41pm
29th Apr 2024 4:55pm
who said there is anything wrong with playing with you?... the question is do you want to play with ME???
this is another amazing poem Fia... amazing.
this is another amazing poem Fia... amazing.
29th Apr 2024 4:57pm
